英语书面表达之建议信.ppt

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Welcometoourclass! Lookatthepictures.DoyouthinkherEnglishisgood?Ifwewritealettertohelpher,whatkindoflettershouldwewrite?AletterofthanksBletterofgivingadviceCletterofapplication.Dletterofinvitation 书面表达----Aletterofadvice Introduction：What’saletterofgivingadvice? 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。（Heading）Purposeoftheletter2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。（Body）Givingadvice3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复(Ending)SummingupadviceWhat’saletterofgivingadvice? 完成下列常用语块给某人提建议___________________________如下_____________________3.在做某事时遇到困难________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意见_____________________6.制订计划____________________7.认为……有用_______________________8.参加_______________________9.听从某人的建议____________________10.把……考虑在内_______________11.得到改善____________________12.有所好转________________________13.依我看来____________________14.我建议……______________________15.我已收到你的来信，得知你…__________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavetroubleindoingsth.makeuseoftakesth.intoconsiderationmakeaplanfind…helpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvicegetimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/viewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…Iwouldliketosuggestthat…. 常用套语Para1.（Heading）Purposeoftheletter1．Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarenotgoodat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou. Para2.（Body）Givingadvice1.First，Firstly，Secondly…．then，afterthat，notonly...butalso...；not...but...；besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...;finally….2.You’dbetterdosth.3.Itisuseful/necessary/importantforyoutodosth.4.Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyou…6.IfIwereyou,Iwould… Para3.(Ending)Summingupadvice1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful. 点睛之笔：1.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!有志者事竟成.2.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧3.Nevergiveup/loseheart.永不放弃！4.Ifyouhaveanytrouble,pleaseturntomeforhelp.如果有任何问题，可以找我帮忙。5.Onlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwell.只有这样才可以学好英语。Thesesentencescanyourcompositionmoreexcellent! 建议信优秀习作欣赏分析： DearPeter,①I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.②Hereareafewsuggestions.③First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.④Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.⑤Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.⑥YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.⑦TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.⑧Bestwishes.句①为写信的_____________(想得到如何学好中文的建议)句②总起有以下几点_____________。句③--句⑥则根据题目中所给的_______,分别写,并适当添加____________,以使文章更丰满。句⑦⑧写。目的或原因建议要点四个建议细节(建议的理由)寄望与祝愿 Whilewriting:Discussingingroups:SupposingthewriterasksyoutogivehersomeadviceonhowtoimproveherEnglish,pleasediscussingroupsofsixandgiveheratleastthreepiecesofadvice:Advice1.__________________________________Advice2___________________________________Advice3___________________________________Advice4___________________________________ WritingNowthewriterasksyoutogivehersomeadviceonhowtoimproveherEnglish.PleaseWritealetterin5minutesingroupsof6accordingtothemodel:DearZhangMing,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon________________,andhereIwilltryto_____________________________.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.Firstly,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Ihope______________________________________andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Yours,LiHua Afterwriting:假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：焦虑症状如头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等，并对这些症状做出以下建议：1．考前制定好合适的复习计划2．考试期间正常作息3．睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠4.其他建议(内容由自己拟定)注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3.词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.) Deareditor,I’mLiHua,aSeniorThreestudentfromGuangmingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtotellyouaboutsomesymptomsofanxietyamongusstudentsbeforeexams.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua