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1、2015海淀一模作文Thepersonwhochangedme范文一：(11分)Hi!Emily,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Infact,thepersonwhohaschangedmeismyfather.Heisnotateacher,buthetaughtmealotoflifelessons.Inthepast,Ialwayswantedtogiveupwhenthethingswasdifficultformetofinishuntilthedaymyfathertook
2、metotheGreatWall.Actually,IwastootiredtoclimbtothetopoftheGreatWall.SoIjustwantedtogiveupinthehalfway.Butmyfatherencouragedmethatafewdifficultieswerenotsupposedtodiscourageus.Hesaid,“Ifyougettothetop,youwillbeamazedathowbeautifultheviewwillbe.”Itwasth
3、esilentsupportandencouragementthatmademeovercomemanydifficulties.Finally,ImanagedtogettothetopandsawthebeautifulsceneriesthatIhadneverseenbefore,justlikewhatmydadsaidtome.Fromthenon,Istartedtotrymybesttokeepondoinganythinginsteadofgivingitupinthehalfw
4、ay.Itwasmyfatherwhomademeknowthevalueofkeepingtrying,sothatIcouldfacethedifficultiesandfightagainstcourageously.Fromthechange,Ihavelearntthatifyoukeepdoingonething,youwillcertainlybesuccessfulandyouwillgetalotofthingsthatyoucan’timagine.范文（二）：Hi!Emily
5、,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Everyonehasbeenchangedbyothersmoreorless(或多或少).Iamnoexception.ThepersonwhochangedmeismyPEteacher.MyscoreonPEwasnotverygoodatfirstalthoughIspentlotsoftimeonit.SoIwasingreatdepressionandalmostwantedtogiveupandavoidedfacingit.Butmyp
6、roblemwasnoticedbymyPEteacher---MissLiu,whoofferedtohelpmedealwithitlater.Fromthenon,sheoftendirectedmewithmyperformanceandtaughtmehowtocontinuepatiently.What’smore,shetoldmetofacethedifficultiescourageouslyandtrymybesttoovercometheminsteadofescapingr
7、eality.Thankstoherdirectionandhelp,Igotfullmarksinthefinalexam.Whatshehadtoldmealwaysremindsmeofkeepingtryingmybestandinspiresmetocheerupnomatterhowdifficulttheproblemis.Becauseofherguidance,Ihavelearnedtofacechallengesandbebravetoovercomedifficulties
8、.I'msuretherewillbesomeonewhohaschangedyou,too.Couldyoupleasewritetotellmeabouthimorher?Yours,LiHua
