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1、WELCOMEWELCOME如何让你的作文更有亮点2012年湖南卷.书面表达生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，期间有烦恼，有惊喜，有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：1.丢失的物品；2.物品失而复得的经过；3.你的感想。注意：词数不少于120个；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称Gettingbackwhatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed.Fortunately,
2、itwasreturned.Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneontheback.Whentheexamended,tomygreatsurprise,Ifoundthedriverwaitingattheschoolgate.Hehandedthephoneove
3、rtome,wearingasmileonhisface.SotouchedwasIthattearsrolleddownmycheeks.Fromthisstory,Iamfirmlyconvincedofthesignificanceofhonesty,whichwillcontributetobuildingawarmandharmonioussociety.Howtopolish(润色)yourcomposition?一遣词—努力使用高级词汇1.At weekends, we havea lot ofhomework to do.At weekends,
4、we have _______ homework to do.endless2.Ihadagoodidea.Agoodidea_____me.struck3.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.Theplan________tobeafailure.4.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustria______________studyingmusic.turnedoutforthepurposeof5.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.She____
5、_________________pronouncingtheword.hastrouble/difficultyin2．学会使用恰当的过渡词：1）表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),otherwise,inspiteof,despite,regardlessof(不管,不顾),although,though,while.3）表示对比关系onthecontrary;Insteadof;ononehand…ontheotherhand;foronething,foranotherthing.2）表示递进、强调关系beside
6、s,furthermore,what’smore,inaddition,moreover,worsestill,tomakematters/thingsworse,6）表示解释、说明关系7）表示结论namely(也就是),actually,infact,asamatteroffact,suchas,forexample/forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothisinshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,as
7、farasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,4）表示因果关系asaresult/consequence(of),owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof(由于),so,therefore,because,since,as5）表示时间、顺序关系shortlyafterwards(不久之后),first,second…,then,next,finally,intheend,eventually.二造句----灵活多变的句式结构1.使用强调句2)ldidn’trealizetheimportanceoflearnin
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