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1、新目标英语人教版八年级下Unit4TrainingofWritingaSuggestionLetterWarming-uptime!I'mangrywithmyhusbandandarguewithhimalotbecausehedoesn'thelpwithhousework.Ican'tsleepverywellatnight,soIfeeltiredinthedaytimeandImakealotofmistakesinclass.Quickspeaking--Ineedyouradvice!作文要求：请同学们针对Amy的烦恼写一封回信，给她提出建议，帮
2、她解决烦恼。字数60-80词。Dearstudents,Iamnothappythesedays.Ihavesomeproblems.Firstly,I'mangrywithmyhusbandandarguewithhimalotbecausehedoesn'thelpwithhousework.Secondly,Ican'tsleepverywellatnight,soIfeeltiredinthedaytimeandImakealotofmistakesinclass.IthinkI'mtoostressedout.WhatshouldIdo?Couldy
3、ougivemesomeadvice,mydearstudents?YoursAmyDearAmy,Don’tworryaboutyourproblem.Here’ssomeadvicetosharewithyou.Firstly,you’dbetternotarguewithyourhusband.Instead,youshouldtalkwithhimnicelyandlethimknowthatyou’reverytiredofthehouseworkandyouneedhishelp.Asforyoursleeping,maybelisteningto
4、somerelaxingmusicwillhelpalot.What’smore,readingordoingsomesportsisalsoagoodwaytorelax.Ihopeeverythingwillbefinesoon.YoursAliceDearAmy,Letmegaveyousomeadvice.Youshouldtalkwithyourhusbandandtellhimsharehouseworkwithyou.Youshouldn’targuewithhim.Youshoulddosomesportsorlistensomemusicto
5、relaxyourself.YoursSamWhichonedoyouthinkisbetter?Why?一档9-10分二档7-8分三档5-6分四档4分以下段落结构是否清晰是否使用合适的连词内容、要点是否符合命题要求字数是否符合要求符合要求并有适当拓展语言丰富准确较丰富准确不丰富有个别错误错误较严重Groupwork.1.四人合作，找出并纠正文中错误。2.参照评分标准，分别确定两篇短文得分，并说明理由。语言是否丰富准确段落清晰连词适合符合要求并有适当拓展内容要点有部分缺失内容要点严重缺失段落较清晰连词较适合段落不清晰无合适连词段落不清晰无合适连词符合要求符合要
6、求字数略有不足字数严重不足FirstSample:DearAmy,Letmegaveyousomeadvice.Youshouldtalkwithyourhusbandandtellhimsharehouseworkwithyou.Youshouldn’targuewithhim.Youshoulddosomesportsorlistensomemusictorelaxyourself.YoursSam不足：1、内容单一，结构不清晰。2、语言重复，缺少衔接词。3、要点不全，字数不足。4、词语、语法使用错误。三档：5-6分SecondSample:DearAmy
7、,Don’tworryaboutyourproblem.Here’ssomeadvicetosharewithyou.Firstly,you’dbetternotarguewithyourhusband.Instead,youshouldtalkwithhimnicelyandlethimknowthatyou’reverytiredofthehouseworkandyouneedhishelp.Asforyoursleeping,maybelisteningtosomerelaxingmusicwillhelpalot.What’smore,readingo
8、rdoingsomesportsisa
