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1、流程图与地图写作分析图表写作三巧克力制作流程图难度等级:两星(较容易)特点:史上图片最多的流程图分段分组描述,不能每张图片写一段除了文字信息之外的细节描写:果实颜色变化:几个颜色,几次变化?温度数字WRITINGTASK1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Theillustrationsshowhowchocolateisproduced.Summariestheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.Writeatleast15
2、0words.巧克力制作流程图Thediagramsexplainthedifferentstagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词:process:整个过程,stage:阶段,step:步骤】Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowinginpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhit
3、ecocoabeans.Firstly,whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.(概括前三幅图)要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些细节内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分Next,thebrownbe
4、ansarespreadinthesuntodry.(四)Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.(五,六)Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.(七,八)Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisrem
5、oved.Theouterpartisnotneededformakingchocolate.(九)Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.丝绸的制作过程难度等级:两星半—三星剑六:test2注意:此难度范围的流程图数量较多。考官例文评析考官范文图一Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.(分段开场)Firstofall,eggsareprod
6、ucedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsaga
7、in.考官范文图二Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.(总括句)Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadscanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.Eachthreadisbetween300and900meterslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavings
8、tage.考官范文结论Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess