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1、WritingNotesDate:July,9th,2017TaskI1.ThreeTypesi.Data:BarChart,LineGraph,Table,PieChartu图表类型:动态图、静态图u动态图:有两个或以上时间u重点l趋势l特殊值:起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点u静态图:只有一个或者没有时间l比较描述对象:使用倍数、比较级ii.Process:FlowChartiii.MapuDescribethechangeuEg:Hospitalislocatedtothewestofcarpark2.评分标准i.Task
2、Achievement/TaskResponseuCovertheRequirementsofthetaskuNoofftopicsu不能添加主观想法,只能描述ii.CoherenceandCohesiveu使用路标性词汇:顺承和转折iii.LexicalResourceu使用非高频词汇uUsewordsandphrasesnaturallyandappropriatelyuVocabularydiversityuAccuratespellingwordsiv.GrammaticalRangeandAccuracyuAccurat
3、egrammarofsentencesuUsedifferentrangesofsentences,structurestoachievergrammatical3.写作方法i.开头段u图表词改写lThechart:barchart,linechart,piechart,table,diagramu动词shows改写l注意时态lShows:illustrates,givesinformationabout,compares,indicates,demonstratesu关键词(一定要改写)l数量改写nThenumberof+可数n
4、Theamountof+不可数nThequantityof+可/不可数nThefigurefor+可/不可数l百分比改写nThepercentageof:theproportionofl句式变化nCompares+不同事物+intermsof+相同事物l名词变化nExpending:expenditureu地点(可以不改写)u时间可以改写lFrom1980to2000:between1980and2000,duringtheperiodfrom1980to2000,overtheperiodof20years,overa20-ye
5、arperioduEG:ThebarchartscomparesthreetypesoftelephonecallsintermsoftheamountoftimespentintheUKbetween1995and2002.ii.主段写法u第一段:起点数值对比+部分趋势u第二段:剩下趋势+终点值对比u数字三种表述方法l数值放在句首nEG:60milliontonnesofgoodsweretransportedbyroadintheUK.l数值放在句末nStandat=be;stoodat=was=totallednEG:The
6、amountofgoodstransportedbyroadintheUKwas60milliontonnes.lThereBe句型nEG:Therewere60billiontonnesofgoodstransportedbyroadintheUK.u比较句的写法Comparisonsl“comparedto”,“comparedwith”,“incomparisonwith”+短语nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpoverty,comparedtoonly4%ofagedcouplel“while
7、”,“whereas”+句子nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpoverty,whiletheproportionofagedcouplelivinginpovertywas4%.u3个数值的对比写法l第一个数值thepercentageatthestartl第二个数值addacomparisonl第三个数值thefigureforlEG:1999,35%ofBritishpeoplewentabroadfortheirholidays,comparedto28%ofAustraliansspentth
8、eirholidaysinadifferentcountry.ThefigurefortheUSAstoodat31%.l若有3个以上的数值,可以用thefigurefor数值Cand数值DwereXandXrespectively.u趋势的写法l