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1、EnglishWriting-Thewaystoimproveyourwriting健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentsworkStyle(体裁)：_____________Person(人称)：_____________Tense(时态):_______________调查报告，记叙

2、文第三人称一般现在时1.审(search):据实描写：适当发挥：度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel2.列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Theywatch

3、TVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.3.加(add)加首尾，使结构完整，突出主题。2.Thebody1.ThebeginningHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.3.TheendingComeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Beginning（2—3句话）“凤头”Body（6—8句话）“猪肚”E

4、nding（2—3句话）“豹尾”“三段式”4.改（correct）Spelling(拼写)Tense(时态)Grammar(语法)Handwriting(书写)Punctuationmarks(标点符号)通览全文仔细查改Correctmistakes1.Everyoneknowsthathealthisveryimportantforourself.2.Ourstudyisgettingmoreandmorehard.3.Theythinktravellingthatcanmakepeoplefeelrelaxedandhappy.4.Ithinkit

5、isunhealthybecausepeopledon’thaveenoughtimetorelaxedthemselves.5.Todaymanypeoplearesufferfromstress6.Andthereareafewpeoplestillworkontheholiday.7.Peoplecanhaveagoodrestwillbehealth..ourselvesharderandharderthattravellingrelaxsufferworkingwhohealthyHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?W

6、emadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.5.美（beautify）选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wema

7、deasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.方法一：善用连词连接句子，使文章更流畅。1、表转折的连词:but,although,however

8、…2、表因果的连词:because,so…,sothat,asaresult3、表顺序的连词: