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1、201004论文翻译个人常见错误总结1.分析:太中文化原文示例:Aimingattheproblemthatthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeiswithlimitedenergyandcomputingcapabilities修改后:Aimingattheproblemthattheenergyandcomputingcapabilitiesofthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeislimited2.分析:状语?使用方式错误。分词做状语原文示例:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auct

2、ion(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesareaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.修改后:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.3.分析:词性混淆。句式错误。And连接两个句子，只省略主语不能省略谓语。原文示例:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibility,and?h

3、ighconsultationrateofsuccess修改后:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibleandhashighconsultationrateofsuccess4.分析:状语从句的使用，句式不熟悉。原文示例:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkcomposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor修改后:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkwhichiscomposedofasetofrand

4、omgeographicallydistributedsensor5.分析:1，词性不对；2，句子结构混乱，不知所云。原文示例:Taskallocationisabroadareaofhigh-performancecomputingresearchproblems修改后:Taskallocationisanissuewhichisstudiedinhigh-performancecomputingbroadly.6.分析:句首大写。名词所有格。原文示例:thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeappliedd

5、irectlyaswirelesssensornetworknodecapacityandcapabilityislimited.修改后:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknode’scapacityandcapabilityislimited.7.分析:冠词用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少谓语。原文示例:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasaagent.However,wirelesssensor

6、networkswithhighdynamics修改后:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasanagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkshavehighdynamics8.分析:近义词的区分。原文示例:WSNissimilarwithMASdueto??thatSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature修改后:WSNissimilarwithMASbecauseSenso

7、rscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature.9.分析:连词的恰当使用。助动词的使用，句子结构混乱。原文示例:AndtheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNisnotaverygoodtakingintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenviromentanditsresourcesconstrained(restricted?)feature.修改后:Inaddit