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1、大学英语四级写作讲义CollegeEnglishTest-Band4--ESSAYWRITING李贻大英课件CourseObjectives课程目的Thestudentsshould:学生应做到:FamiliarizewiththestructureofCET-4writing熟悉四级作文结构Raisetheawarenessofthecommonmistakesmadebylearners(yourselves).提高检查常见错误的意识Improvewritingbycorrectingthefore-men
2、tionedmistakes以检促学,以改促写CourseStructure教学流程Theteacherwillpresent:1.Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePhone2.Badexamplesinthestudents’works.反面教材:以124人的作业反馈为例3.Suggestedimprovementsforbadexamples强力纠错:以改促写4.Modelessayforreference参考范文Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePho
3、neDirections:ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheMobilePhone.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:Outline:1.移动电话发展很快2.移动电话的好处3.移动电话的不足之处EssayStructure:Fourparagraphs作业反馈,结构把握较好:I
4、ntroductoryParagraph引入段Advantagesparagraph正面论述段connectingdevice:firstly,secondly,…finallyDisadvantagesparagraph反面论述段connectingdevice:first,then,…finallyConclusiveparagraph总结段IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples主谓搭配不当:thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisincreasingrap
5、idly.Themobilephone’susageisbecomingmoreandmoreconvenience.Corrections:改正thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisaccelerating/advancingrapidly.Themobilephonesarebecomingincreasinglyconvenienttouse.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples滥用误用”moreandmore”:moreandmorepeoplemo
6、reandmoredevelopedmobilephonesbecomemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformance.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Substitutesto”moreandmore”替代法:moreandmorepeopleanincreasingnumberofpeople/agrowingpopulationmoreandmoredevelopedbefurtherdeveloped/improvedmobilephonesbec
7、omemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformancemobilesarebecomingmuchmoresmarterandwithbetter/higherperformanceIntroductoryParagraph引入段Enrichyourstyles丰富表达法:众所周知:asweallknowitisknowntoallthat/asisknown,手机的发展theadvancement/improvement/evolution/developmentofmo
8、bilephonesMostpeoplehavemobilephones.Themajority/Alargenumber/Alargeproportionofthepublicown/possessmobiles.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Modelparagraphforreference:参考答案Asisknown,theadvancementofthem
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