李贻大英写作2012.ppt

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1、大学英语四级写作讲义CollegeEnglishTest-Band4--ESSAYWRITING李贻大英课件CourseObjectives课程目的Thestudentsshould:学生应做到：FamiliarizewiththestructureofCET-4writing熟悉四级作文结构Raisetheawarenessofthecommonmistakesmadebylearners(yourselves).提高检查常见错误的意识Improvewritingbycorrectingthefore-men

2、tionedmistakes以检促学，以改促写CourseStructure教学流程Theteacherwillpresent:1.Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePhone2.Badexamplesinthestudents’works.反面教材：以124人的作业反馈为例3.Suggestedimprovementsforbadexamples强力纠错：以改促写4.Modelessayforreference参考范文Thewritingassignment:TheMobilePho

3、neDirections:ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheMobilePhone.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:Outline:1.移动电话发展很快2.移动电话的好处3.移动电话的不足之处EssayStructure：Fourparagraphs作业反馈，结构把握较好：I

4、ntroductoryParagraph引入段Advantagesparagraph正面论述段connectingdevice:firstly,secondly,…finallyDisadvantagesparagraph反面论述段connectingdevice:first,then,…finallyConclusiveparagraph总结段IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples主谓搭配不当：thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisincreasingrap

5、idly.Themobilephone’susageisbecomingmoreandmoreconvenience.Corrections:改正thedevelopmentofmobilephoneisaccelerating/advancingrapidly.Themobilephonesarebecomingincreasinglyconvenienttouse.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Badexamples滥用误用”moreandmore”：moreandmorepeoplemo

6、reandmoredevelopedmobilephonesbecomemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformance.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Substitutesto”moreandmore”替代法：moreandmorepeopleanincreasingnumberofpeople/agrowingpopulationmoreandmoredevelopedbefurtherdeveloped/improvedmobilephonesbec

7、omemoreandmoresmartandmoreandmoreperformancemobilesarebecomingmuchmoresmarterandwithbetter/higherperformanceIntroductoryParagraph引入段Enrichyourstyles丰富表达法:众所周知：asweallknowitisknowntoallthat/asisknown,手机的发展theadvancement/improvement/evolution/developmentofmo

8、bilephonesMostpeoplehavemobilephones.Themajority/Alargenumber/Alargeproportionofthepublicown/possessmobiles.IntroductoryParagraph引入段Modelparagraphforreference:参考答案Asisknown,theadvancementofthem