立竿见影的提分句式.ppt

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1、立竿见影的提分句式1.非谓语结构岛名：钓鱼岛地理位置：中国东海归属为中国固有领土信息量不足的表达方式：(1)DiaoyuislandislocatedintheEastChinaSea. (2)DiaoyuislandhasalwaysbeentheinherentterritoryofChina.优化：Diaoyuisland,locatedintheEastChinaSea,hasalwaysbeentheinherentterritoryofChina.2.“with”结构语种： 汉语历史：  

2、 超过三千年现状：   约1/5世界人口在使用信息量不足的表达方式：(1)Chinesehasahistoryofmorethanthreethousandsyears.(2)Chineseisusedbyapproximatelyonefifthoftheworldpopulation.优化：Withahistoryofmorethanthreethousandsyears,Chineseisusedbyapproximatelyonefifthoftheworldpopulation.3.同位语

3、结构人物：杜老师职业： 英语老师描述：可爱，经常用甜美的声音和我们说话信息量不足的表达方式：(1)Mrs.DuisaverylovelyEnglishteacher. (2)Mrs.Dualwaystalkstousinhersweetvoice.优化：Mrs.Du,averylovelyEnglishteacher,alwaystalkstousinhersweetvoice.4.倒装结构1:否定前置+部分倒装权利：免费参加外籍教师的周末英语讲座；暑假参加学校组织的学生赴英访问团。Reporter

4、scanattendtheweekendEnglishlecturegivenbytheforeignteachers,andvisitEnglandwiththestudents’visitingteamduringsummervacation.notonly…..butalso…NotonlycanreportersattendtheweekendEnglishlecturegivenbytheforeignteachers,butalsovisitEnglandwiththestudents’vi

5、sitingteamduringsummervacation.Facedwithdifficulties,neverdotheygiveupbuttrytheirbesttoovercomethem.4.倒装结构2:only+状语，部分倒装Onlywhenyoulostit,couldyourealizehowpreciousitis.Onlybystudyingwell,canyourealizeyourdream.4.倒装结构3:adj+as/thoughsbis,他虽然很累，依然帮助了我Tired

6、ashewas,hestillhelpedme.5.定语从句中国吸烟人数：约3.5亿  分布：男性占3/4(1)Thereareapproximately350millionsmokersinChina(2)Threefourthsofthemaremales.优化：Thereareapproximately350millionsmokersinChina,threefourthsofwhomaremales.第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士Hegainedhisfirstdegreei

7、n1936andyearslater,hereceivedanotherdegreeasamedicaldoctor优化：Hegainedhisfirstdegreein1936,afterwhich,hereceivedanotherdegreeasamedicaldoctor6.被动语态bedone我们应该立刻想办法解决水资源短缺问题Weshouldimmediatelytakesomemeasurestosolvetheproblemofwater-shortage.优化：Itishightime

8、thatsomeimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.