英文写作辅导.ppt

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1、scribblesrubbishSchoolenvironmentProblemsSolutionsLearningobjectivesBytheendofthisperiod,wewillbeableto1.enlargeourvocabularyrelatedtoacertaintopic,theschoolenvironment,throughreviewingsomewords,phrasesandsentencepatterns;2.knowhowtopolish(润色)acompositionbyintegratinginformationandusingvarious

2、regularsentencepatterns.Writing假如你是中学生李华。你校英文报正在就学校乱涂乱画（scribbles）问题向全校师生征求解决的办法。请你用英语向该报写一封建议信。信的内容应包括以下方面：1.简单描述现象和个人看法；2.提出解决这一问题的建议（不少于2个）；3.表达你的愿望。注意：1.词数：100词左右；2.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir，DearSir,Whenwewalkaroundtheschoolwecanseesomescribblesonthewallsoftheschoolbuildings.Theyhaveinfluenced

3、thebeautyofourschoolenvironment.Wehavetodosomethingtosolvethisproblem.First,ourschoolshouldmakesomerulestoforbidstudentsfromscribbling.Second,ourschoolshouldeducatestudentsandletthemknowtheimportanceofprotectingourschoolenvironment.Third,weshouldclearthescribblesandmakethewallscleanagain.Ihopemya

4、dvicecanhelpyou.Ialsohopeeveryonecantrytoprotectourschool.Bydoingsoourschoolcanbeabetterplacetostudyin.DearSir,Whenwewalkaroundtheschoolwecanseesomescribblesonthewallsoftheschoolbuildings.Theyhaveinfluencedthebeautyofourschoolenvironment.Wehavetodosomethingtosolvethisproblem.First,ourschoolshould

5、makesomerulestoforbidstudentsfromscribbling.Second,ourschoolshouldeducatestudentsandletthemknowtheimportanceofprotectingourschoolenvironment.Third,weshouldclearthescribblesandmakethewallscleanagain.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Ialsohopeeveryonecantrytoprotectourschool.Bydoingsoourschoolcanbeabetterpla

6、cetostudyin.优点：1.要点全2.段落层次清晰3.连贯性尚可4.基本无语法错误5.书写整洁，卷面干净需改进的地方：语法结构、句式表达单一高分作文评分标准（高分23-25）卷面美要点齐无错误字数够文字优✔✔✔✔？★Polishingacomposition1.Integratingtheinformation写作信息整合并列连词主从句非谓语介词短语同位语Examples:1.Somepeoplesmokeeverywhere.Thisisharmfultoourenvironmentandhealth.(从句)2.Whenwewalkaroundtheschool,wecans

7、eerubbisheverywhere.(非谓语)3.I’mLiHuawhoisastudentfromNanfangHighSchool.(同位语),whichWalkingI’mLiHua,astudentfromNanfangHighSchool.(同位语)2.Usingvariousregularsentencepatterns1).强调句型（Itiseveryone’seffortthatcanmakeourschool