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1、四级写作评分标准及范文点评2009.4.15作文题目：“WomenintheModernWorld”提纲：1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Longage,womenonlydidsom
2、ethinginthekitchenorathome.Nowmanyofthemhaveseriousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethingathomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingathome. Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.Inthefac
3、torythewomentoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadotherpeoplecountry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscie
4、ntistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife. Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingwithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo.Wealsoshou
5、ldrealize,women’libertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased.ManyWomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemen
6、before.Foranexample.Somewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomemanagerofacompany.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjob.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving.Manyhusbandsonlywa
7、nthiswifetostayathome,anddohouseworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhave
