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1、Directions1StudythefollowingpicturescarefuIIyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushouId:1.describeoDirections!Studythefollowingpicturescarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould:1・describethetwopictures,2.interprettheirmeaning,and3.pointoutthereasonsforsuchphenomenon.Youshouldwrite160-200wordsneatlyonANSW
2、ERSHEET2.审题：这道题包含两幅对比鲜明的图画，指令要求在描述图画后阐明含义并给出该现象的原因。我们应该这样來构造全文：第一段描述图画；第二段发表自己对图画的看法；第三段给出该现象的原因；第四段下结论，简要提出解决问题的办法。经过学习之后，大家就会知道这是一个极为重要的模式，请大家用心掌握。Sample:Asisdepictedbythetwopictures,asharpcontrastisshapedbetweentheparentsandtheson.Intheleftdrawing,theparentsareworkinghardinthefield,bending
3、overandsweatingheavily.Nearthemisabasketwithverysimplefoodinit・However,intherightdrawing，theirsonissquanderingthemoneyonluxuriousfoodandchattingonmobilephone.Howpitifultheparentsare!Theysparenoeffortstoearnmoneyinordertosupporttheirson'sstudyandlifeinuniversity.Theyseemtobewillingtodoeverythi
4、ngthatishelpfultotheirbelovedson.But,inreturn,thesonspendsthemoneyashelikeswithoutknowinghowhardhisparentsworkforitandhowheshoulduseittobetterpreparehimselfforfuturecareer.Inmyopinion,thereasonsforthisphenomenoncomedowntooneessentialpoint—failureofbothfamilyandschooleducation.Foronething,quit
5、ealotofChineseparentsspoiltheirchildren.Allparents'loveforchildrenisthesame,butdifferentisthewayofshowingit.Manyparentshopetoomuchthattheirchildrenwillhaveabrightfuture,which,intheireyes,meanskeyuniversities,hotmajors,goodsalariesandsoon.Sotheytrytheirbesttosatisfythechildren'sdemandsinsteado
6、fteachingthemtostruggleforfuturewiththeirownhands.Foranother,centeredonexammarks,theschooleducationalsofails,toalargeextent,toimpartmoralstandardstothechildren,especiallytheconceptionofselfrelianeeandhardstruggle・Inaword,tochangethephenomenondescribedbytheabovepictures,areforminourcurrenteduc
7、ationsystemisnotonlynecessarybuturgent.点评：第一段的重点是在描述时突出两幅图画之间强烈的反差，所以这里专门加上了第一句话。这一段在用词上也很考究。第二段强烈地表达了自己的感想。首句使用了感叹句。而后先说父母竭尽全力挣钱供孩子读书，后说孩子不知父母辛苦，不懂得如何正确利用父母的血汗钱。笫三段给出了该现象的原因——家庭和学校教育的失败，而后分为两方面來说，结构极为清晰。最后一段只有一句话，掷地有声——耍想改变现状，只能改革当前的教育体系。心得：
