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1、假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你参加的一次拓展训练活动。请根据图片的先后顺序，用英语为校刊写一篇短文。词数不少于60。参考词汇：OutwardBound拓展训练第一节情景作文2012,4海淀一模书面表达时态，人称要准确，要点要全：到达，跳桥，翻墙，照相缺一项9-11分，缺两项2-5分，有细节支撑，有一幅图不写细节的就降一档，要有语言质量，逻辑合理Earlyinthemorning,wearrivedattheOutwardBoundCentreinourschoolbus/byschoolbus.Withthesunr
2、isingabovethehorizon,wetookourschoolbusheadingfortheOutwardBoundtrainingcampThemomentwearrived,weweredividedintothreedifferentteamsandthetrainerintroducedthearrangementstous.Uponarrival,wegatheredattheentranceinthreegroups,receivingtheinstructionsfromthecoach.Jumpedacrossabroke
3、nbridgeJumpfromoneside/endtotheother.Protectedbythesafetyropestied/fastenedaroundthewaist.Afraid,thefirstgirlhesitatedatthatheightatfirst.Lookingdown,somegirlsdarednotjumpacrossinthebeginningWiththeencouragementandhelpofthecoach,wefinallymadeit.Thoughscaredatfirst,everyoneofus,
4、withthecoach’sencouragementandhelp,finallymanagedtojumpontotheotherendsafeandsoundoneafteranother.Whatathrillingexperience!Climbedovertheescapewall.WiththehelpofthecoachandtheteammateswesucceededingettingoverthesurvivalwallSupportedbythosestandingbelowandpulledbythoseabove,allo
5、fuswereabletogettosafety.Wehadtodependonthepowerofthewholeteamsoastomakeittotheothersideoftheescapingwall.Hadaphototakenwithawardsandthecoach.WonprizesforourcourageandcooperationGotawardsforbraveryandteamwork.Tokeepthegoodmemoriesforgood,wegotseveralphotostakenattheentranceofth
6、etrainingbasewiththetrainerandprizeswewon.Torecordthechallengingbutrewardingexperience,wetookphotoswiththecoachandawards.情景作文典型错误时态：误用现在时/现在时与过去时混搭。落要点：第一图（乘车到达），最后一图（合影留念）。介绍营地过细/把第二幅图和第三幅图合并并一笔带过。单词拼写：1）名词/形容词/介词动词化；2）不规则动词ed化；3）单词拼写语音化/随意化board，effect/efforts;rope,bridge,ner
7、vous;divided;led;skip/slip;climb;jump;flew;unity;teamwork;cooperation,bravery/courage;winanaward/aprizeInthatdaymorning/OnlastFriday,…Thetrainencouragedusthatdon’tbeafraid.Byourschoolbus/underthehelpof…Wetookthebusget/tothere.Wemadeup/dividedintothreegroups.Wejumpedfromonesaidt
8、oanotherNextwehadtoover/through/acrosstheflee/leavewal
