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5、yinthiswaycanweenjoythepleasureandconvenienceofonlineshoppingwithouttheconcernofbeingtreated.第一段第一段：总述现象并引出话题第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点第三段：给出自己的建议第三段第二段第一段第一段第二段第一段第二段第一段第三段第二段第一段第三段第二段第三段第二段第三段Nowadays,canwefindapersonwhohasnotexperiencedonlineshopping?Definitelynot.Onlineshoppingisc

6、omingintofashioninmostofcitiesduetotherapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology.文章开头要注意withthedevelopmentoftheinternetDefinitelyad.毫无疑问的ofcoursenotComeinto进入……状态e.g.～force/power/effect获得，继承Par.1Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer,itcansave

7、sometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers（零售商）,itcancutsomecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds（流动资金）.句子主语可以变换Perspective看法,观点(+on)view/thinkPar.2Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployee

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