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1、高考英语写作中词汇与句型表达的多样高考作文1OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandmylittlesisterandArFufollowed.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysisterwalkedtotheriverandArFufollowedher.Shesawabeautifulfloweronthebankoftheriver,shewantedtopickit.Shefellintotheriver.WhenArFusawthat,itbarke
2、dandjumpedintotheriverquickly.Oneday,followedbymylittlesisterandArFu,myparentswenttoworkinthefields.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysister,withnothingtodo,walkedtotheriversidenearbywithArFu.Atthesightofabeautifulflowerontheriverbank,shewantedtopickit.However,shefelli
3、ntotheriver.SeeingthatArFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterassoonaspossible.2_________________________________________________________________________________________书面表达评分标准：北京卷2005年考试说明中的评分标准情景作文一、评分原则：本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后
4、给分。评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。词汇和句式的多样性(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with/for我花了50块钱买这本字典。Spend…on/inItcosts/takes…toPay…for…Chargesb…for…Iw
5、ascharged$50forthedictionary.我会尽我所能去帮助他。do/trymybestdoeverythingIcandoallthatIcandowhat/whateverIcanIwilltohelphim.I’llhelphimasmuchaspossible.高考经典句型结构:1.It’syearssinceIworkedinBeijing.2.Itwon’tbelongbeforeyougetwell.3.ItwasnotuntilyoutoldmethatIrealizedmymistake
6、.4.NotuntilyoutoldmedidIrealizemymistake.5.Itissaidthatafirebrokeoutlastnight.6.Therealwaysexistbiggapsbetweendreamsandrealities.7.Shewassoexcitedthatsheburstintotears.8.Workhard,andyouaresuretowin.Hesatthere,____________（手里拿着书）。____________（eyes/closed）。________
7、____（背着书包）。____________（nothing/todo)。Thereisagirl.Sheissittingbetweenus.2.Thisisabook.Thebookwasboughtyesterday.Thereisagirlwhoissittingbetweenus.Thisisabookwhichwasboughtyesterday.Rewritefollowingsentences3.走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友.Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet,hemetanol
8、dfriend.4._________________,thecitylooksbeautiful.Walkinginthestreet从天空中看，Whenitisseenfromthesky,thecitylooksbeautiful.Seenfromthesky由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。Notk
