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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhi
2、swifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!"hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesaw instantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolfquicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Wi
3、thonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistenthag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶
4、).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheir waytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwh
5、entheysawtwo cyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater, theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写
6、短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Para2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.评分标准1与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度2内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况3应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性4上下文的连贯性Narration（记叙文）Argumentation（议论文）C.Exposition（说明文）
7、Writingstylewho:Mac hisfriends PaulandBeckywhen:onabright,warmJulyafternoonwhere:fromhishometoAlaskawhat:tookatripandadventuredwhy:enjoyedthelifeastory(when,where,who,what,how)审体裁：记叙文审时态：一般过去时审前文大意以及要点what:heard,saw,fountout,fired,firedagain,pedalhard,wavedan
