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1、1997年在职研究生作文Part111Writing(30minutes,15points)Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan100wordsonTheproblemsIhaveinmyEnglishstudy.YourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese・Outline:①遇到哪些困难②产生原因③如何克服TheproblemsIhaveinmyEnglishstu
2、dyDuringmystudyofEnglish,Imeetwithsomeproblems.(主旨句)Theseproblemsareasfollows.(过渡句)Firstofall,whenIreadorlistenEnglish,Ialwaysencounterwordsandexpressions.(解释句—)Sovocabularyisatroublesomeproblem.点一)Secondly,withafairlylargevocabulary・Iamstillnotabletowriteavividandfluentcomposition.
3、(要点二)Thirdly,andalsothemostannoyingthingisaftersomanyyearsstudying,IcouldnotcommunicatewithpeopleinEnglish.(要点三)Therearemanyreasonsfortheseproblems•(段落主题句)Foronething,Ihavenostudyplantoenlargevocabularyandrearrangewhathavelearnedbefore.(要点一)Foranother,intheprocess,Ihavenotsummarized
4、acompletesetofmethodswhichwillinstructmeinthefuturestudy.(要点二)Beyondtheseobviousreasons,howeverliesadeepercause,whenIstudyEnglish,Ihavenotcreatedanenvironmenttopractiseanduseit•(要点三)Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthatinordertoovercomethem,aboveall,Ishouldmakeastudyschedule,forexample,
5、whenIwouldfinishConceptEnglish,whenIwouldgoovertheformercontentsetc.(解释一,对应上段要点—)TheschedulekeepanEnglishdiarymoreefficientandgoal-specified・(作用一)Atthesametime,IshouldkeepanEnglishdiaryandtrybesttofindopportunitiestopractiseEnglish・5军释—)Thepurposeofdiaryisnotonlytopractisethinkingan
6、dwritinginEnglishzbutalsoprovideusanopportunitytosummarizestudymethodswhenyouarefree.(作用二对应要点二和要点三)onlyinthiswaycouldIcultivatethehabitofthinkinginEnglishandusingEnglish・(小结句)写作解析:第一段:首句直接点题,提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题,然后简练过渡,引起下文。木段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起,如采取这样的句型结构''IhavebeenstudyingEnglishformanyye
7、ars,andyettherearethreewhichhavealwaysbeenholdingbackmyprogress・Oneisthatanotheristhatthethirdisthat〃这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能,加强语气,然后列举问题,条理清晰,是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。第二段:呼应提纲第一项要求,仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原I大I。在叙述原因时,有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。第三段:本段针对上而产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因,其内容层次冇浅入深,由表面原因''学习无计划性〃到''不掌握学习方法"直至'
8、'忽略了语言学习的规律:具有一个语言学