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1、大学生英语作文教授指点摘自《二十一世纪报》Weneedyourhelpdesperately读者原文Dearfriends,I'mwritingtoyou,onbehalfofthestudentunion,toaskforhelpforourschoolmate,LiMing.He'sseriouslyillandhastohavealungtransplantatonce・Tomakethingsworse,hecomesfromthewestofourcountry,whichmeanshisfamilyisquite
2、poor.LiMingisnowconfrontedwiththefollowingdifficulties.Tobeginwith,hecan'taffordthemedicalexpenses.Hisfamilydoesn'thaveagoodfinancialbackgroundandmoreover,hisparentshavealreadyborrowedalotofmoneytosendhimtouniversity.Inviewoftheirlowincomeandseverefinancialsituatio
3、n,wehopeyoucanshowyoursympathy.Inaddition,hisfamilyisfarawayandheneedssomeonetotakecareofhimdayandnightinsteadofhisparentswhoarethousandsofmilesfromhere・Onlyundercarefulcarecanourfriendrecoverfromhisdisease・Onnoaccountcanweseeourfriendsufferwithoutgivinghimahand!He
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5、ehalfofthestudentunion,toaskforhelpforourschoolmate,LiMing.Hc°sseriouslyillandwillhavetohavealungtransplantatonce・Tomakethingsworse,hecomesfromthewestofthecountry,whichmeanshisfamilyarequitepoor.LiMingnowfacesthefollowingdifficulties:Tobeginwith,hecan*taffordthemed
6、icalexpenses・Hisfamilyarepenniless.Andtheyhavealreadyborrowedheavilytosendhimtouniversity.Inviewoftheirlackofincomeanddifficultfinancialsituation,wchopeyoucanshowsomesympathybymakingacashdonation.Inaddition,hisfamilylivefarfromhereandhedoesnlhaveanyonetotaketheplac
7、eofhisparents,tolookafterhimdayandnight.Itsonlywithintensivecarethatourfriendwillbeabletorecoverfromhisdisease・Wccannotbeartoseeourfriendsufferandnotlendahand!He'sindesperatenccdofyourhelp,especiallyintheareaofmoneytohelppayforhisexpenses・Anyonewhowantstohelpinanyw
8、aycancontactusbytelephoneat65xxxxl2orbye-mailatlove@sina.com・Pleaseactwithoutdelay!Yourssincerely,ZhangHuaChairmanoftheStudentUnion夏教授的讲评这封信完全符合指
