3.正文段之论点

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1、托福写作正文段——论点BodyThebodyisthecenteroftheessay.Eachbodyparagraphcontainsonesupportingpointthatdevelopsthethesis.Thebodyparagraphsaresometimescalleddevelopmentalparagraphs.Theycontainspecificexamples,reasons,anddetailsthatsupportthethesis.Youressayfortheindependentwritingtaskwillprobablycontainthreeb

2、odyparagraphs.agree支持段1支持段2支持段3disagree反对段1反对段2反对段3however支持/反对段反对/支持段1反对/支持段2反对保留支持OrganizeyourarticleUnity各个正文段都要有明确的主题句＋扩展句＋结论句。ConcludingremarksSupportingdetailsTopicsentenceDevelopingsentence破题破题点:因果型1)这个因果关系推理中的原因是否成立?2)假设这个原因成立,从它能否推出结果?2010.11.13Toimprovethequalityofeducation,universities

3、shouldspendmoremoneyonprofessors'salaries.Analysis正：从而提高教学质量反：有其他的方式提高教学质量如建立评估系统和合理安排教学大纲提高薪资?高教育质量提高教授薪资会导致的结果正：促进教学、就业热情；提高科研经费反：占用教学设备的资金BrainstormingAgreeDisagree1.要提高教学质量，要有好的教学设备。2.要提高教学质量，要有好的评估系统。3.要提高教学质量，要有好的课程安排。1.高薪资能鼓励教授更加认真工作。2.高薪资能吸引更多人才从事这项工作。3.教授需要经费完成科研任务。1Thehighsalarycouldenc

4、ouragethoseprofessorstoworkharderandbemorediligent.2Aincreasingnumberoftalentpeopleattractedbyhighsalarywouldliketodevotethemselvestothiscareer.3Theprofessorsmayhavemoremoneytoconducttheirscientificresearches.Outline:Viewpoint:agree1Universitiesshouldspendmoremoneybuyingmoreadvancedteachingfacili

5、ties.2Universitiesshouldestablishevaluationsystemtoassessprofessorsandstudents.3Universitiesshouldadjustcourseschedulestomeettheneedsofstudents.Outline:Viewpoint:disagree破题破题点:事实类1)能否从公认的原则或事实中推出相同或相反的判断?2)能否举出相关的事例?2010.9.11Parentstodayaremoreinvolvedintheirchildren'seducationthanparentswereinth

6、epast.教育制度观念ThedailyfulfilledinstitutionsystemTheincreasinglyimprovededucationalsystemThemoreandmoreopenmind过去和现在或未来的对比Comparison科技TherapiddevelopmentofscienceAnalysis注意“等于”BrainstormingAgreeDisagree1.过去生活艰辛更懂得知识的重要性。2.家长没有过多压力从而能更好辅助孩子。3.没有高科技的过去，人们普遍比较勤劳。1.教育观念越来越强。2.高科技帮助家长们逃离繁忙的工作中从而有时间顾及孩子的学

7、习。3.教育制度完善，学校要求与家长的互动增加。1Withtheincreasingemphasisputoneducation,parentscaremoreaboutchildren’sstudy.2Thehightechnologycouldassistparentstohavemoretimetospendwithchildren.3Parentsarerequiredtohavemoreconnectionwithscho