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1、2010年6级写作胡平原创满分范文MyViewsonUniversityRankingMyViewsonUniversityRankingUniversityRankingbecomesaprevalenttendencyespeciallywhentheseniorhighschoolstudentsapplyfortheiridealuniversity.Inordertoattractthesuperiorstudents,everyuniversitysparesnoefforttorankittot
2、hetopone.第一段：现状+原因Undoubtedly,universityrankingwilldoharmnotonlytoindividualbutalsotooursocietyprofoundly.Ontheonehand,universityrankingcaninfluencehighschoolstudent'sjudgement・Perhapssomestudentsjustintendtoenterthetoprankinguniversityignoringtheirowninter
3、est・Ontheotherhand,intendingtobecomethetoprankinguniversity,someuniversitiesinvestlargeamountoffundonthesuperficialfacilitiesinsteadofsupportingtheacademicresearches・第二段:总写坏处+对个人的影响+原因+对社会的影响+原因Universityranking,frommyperspective,isunnecessary.Afterallitish
4、ardtodeterminethestandardofuniversityranking.Atthesametime,wronguniversityrankingcanmisleadthecorrectdeterminationofstudents.第三段：我的观点+原因1+原因22008年12月六级作文胡平原创满分范文！！2008年12刀六级作文题Howtoimprovestudent'smentalhealth1、大学生的心理健康十分重要2、因此，学校可以……3、我们口己应当……Nowadays,coll
5、egestudent'smentalhealthhasarousedapublicconcern,becausestudents5mentalhealthisassignificantastheiracademiccapacity.Withouthealthypsychologycollegestudentwillneverleadahappylife,letalonefinishtheirstudyandcreatetheirsplendidfuture・Obviously,propermeasuresca
6、nbetakentopreventtheproblemsinouruniversity.Tobeginwith,moreopportunitiesshouldbeofferedforstudentstorelaxthemselves,afteralltherearemanypressuressuchasthestudyJoveorfamilyburdenforourcollegestudents・Whafsmore,morementalhealthclassescanbeopenedtocarrythehea
7、lthyandoptimisticlifevalue・Ofcourse,ourcollegestudentsalsocanadoptsomeeffectivemeasurestorelieveourselves.Forexampie,wheneveryouencountersomeproblems,talkingtoyourfriendsoryourparentsisawisechoicetoreleaseyourpressureorpain.Ifyoureallygetintotrouble,another
8、wayistoconsultthepsychologicalexpert,becausetheycancomeupwithasolutiontohelpyou.总评：六级作文其实不需要太多的高级词汇，因为高级词汇你真正在考试的时候是想不出来的。还不如在文章的层次方面，句式方面稍下功夫，再加上几个固定搭配（最地道，最强大）就完全搞定了思路分析:第一段：第一句现状+原因，大学生健康已经引起了广泛关注，因
