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1、1）目前人学生面临就业难的问题2）分析导致该问题的原因3）大学生应该如何应对该问题EmploymentPressureFacingCollegeStudents行文思路本题属于捉纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，捉纲第2点要求分析该问题产纶的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断木文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，木文应包含如下内容：指出人学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。高分范文EmploymentPressureFacingCollegeStudents[1]Aboutadecadeago
2、,universitystudentscouldfindsatisfactoryandenviablejobsaftertheirgraduation.[l]Butnow,thingsaredifferent.Today?suniversitystudentsusuallyexperiencegreatdifficultiesfindingsatisfactoryjobs.Theyoftencomplainthatgraduationmeansjoblessness.[2]Whatisthecauseofthisphenomenon?[3]Firstly,w
3、iththeenrollmentextensionofuniversities,[4]thesupplyofuniversitygraduatesexceedssocialdemand・Thisresultsinadecreasedchanceforanyindividualgraduatetofindajob.[3]Secondly,universitystudents[5]tendtospendmostoftheirtimeatschoolinstudyingacademicsubjectsandlackrelevantjobexperience.[3]
4、Thirdly,somestudentsdon'tstudyhardduringthecollege・Afterfouryearsofuniversitylife,theyhaven'tgainedtheknowledgethosefairlygoodjobsorpositionsrequire・[6]Facingtheincreasinglyfiercecompetition,weuniversitystudentsshouldtryourbeststochangethissituation.[3]Abovcall,wheninschool,wcshoul
5、dmakethemostofourtimeand[7Jputourheartintoourstudies.[3JWhat,smore,wecantakepart-timejobsandattendsocialactivitiesinourssparetimeto[8Jaccumulaterelevantpracticalexperience・[3」Besides，whenweapplyforjobsaftergraduation,weshould[9]attachmoreimportancetoaccumulatingexperiencethantothes
6、tartingsalary.【亮点点评】[1J过去和现在进行対比。[2]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。[4]“大学牛供过于求”。[5]“倾向，趋于”。[创“血对FI趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。⑺“用心学习”。[8]"积累相关的实际经验”。[9]“更加关注”。佳句临摹1•佳句：Facingtheincreasinglyfiercecompetition,universitystudentsshouldtrytheirbesttochangethissituation.临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机
7、。2•佳句：Theyshouldattachmoreimportancetoaccumulatingexperiencethantotheirstartingsalary临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。[KEY]1.Havingexperiencedhardships,wewillknowbetterhowtosurvivecrisis.2.Obviously,weshouldattachmoreimportancetoone'sabilitiesthantohisdegree.范文2Directions:Forthispart,
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