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1、丄6分：文章切题，语句通顺，没有明显错误（小错在6个以内），有一些比较不错的语句（复杂句、排比.倒装、从句等等）就是6分的标准了。丄7分：文笔流畅，错误极少，有个别闪光点就是7分。分:论点新颖、别具一格，就是8分。或者论点一般，但十分切题，语言很漂亮，令人印象深刻。也是8分（不过一般这样也可以给7分）。SomepeoplethinkthefunctionofuniversityeducationistopreparestudentsfortheirfutureemploymentHowever,othersbelievethatitmusthaveotherimportantfu

2、nctions.Discussandindicatewhatotherfunctionstheuniversityeducationcanprovide.Someholdthatthefunctionofuniversityorcollegeeducationistohelpstudentstogetreadyfortheirfuturepaying-job・Whileothersconsiderthattheuseofuniversityorcollegeeducationismorethanthemerefunction.AsfarasIamconcerned,univers

3、itymusthaveotherimportantfunctionsinmanyaspects・Thereisnodoubtthatwegotouniversitytoimproveourskillsandabilityoncopingwiththethingsthatwouldhappeninourfuturejob・Butoncampusitisnottheonlyfunction.Becauseuniversityisnotonlytheplaceonlytostudyinbutisapartofsocietywherewecouldlearnhowtocommunicat

4、ewitheachotheranddevelopourselves5personality・Whicheveruniversitiesorcollegesareintheworldarecomposedwithpeopleandbuildings・Theyarejustlikeasmallsocietyandwecantakeadvantageofthemtomakefriendswithallkindsandbackgrounds・Howwecouldkeepthefriendshipisoneoffunctionweshouldlearnintheuniversitybefo

5、rewegotothetruesocietytohuntourcareer.Therefore,oneofthefunctionsofuniversityeducationisthatwecouldenlargeourrelationshipintheuniversity.Honestisalsoanotherfunctionthatwecouldlearnintheuniversityorcollege.Beforewetaketheexam,wehavetopromisethatwewillnotcheatingduringdetestandwhensomeoneiscaug

6、htforcheating,he(orshe)willbepunishedstrictly・Honestisoneofthebasicprinciplesforeachperson.Universityorcollegeisnotjustaplaceforstudentsonlytopreparetheirfutureemploymentbutaplacethatstudentscouldlearnhowtomakefriendsandbehonesty.(285words)得分：6分文章结构很清晰，5段作文，首段和尾段分别是总起和总结；文章句与句间的衔接处理地很一般，没有什么连

7、接词来表达上下句的关系；从语言方面来说,文章总体的语言水平尚可，句子很容易理解，但是也有很多语法错误,如Whicheveruniversitiesorcollegesareintheworldarecomposedwithpeopleandbuildings蘇目得般莫名。此外，文章的措辞很有限，没有什么同义词或词组的变换＞句型也一般＞没有太精彩的好句。Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfacilitiesa