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1、小nu寸河用棕孙杳zj、—占Hiaomamc.emac.ionai_eDucaczionGRE写作范文（附译文）小马过河为大家准备了“GRE写作范文（附译文）”，供各位备考GRE的考生们参考使用,来提高白己的托福成绩！免费咨询电话：400-0123-267IssueThefollowingisfromaneditorialintheMidvaleObserver,alocalnowspapot・"EversincetheI9601s,whentelevisionsetsbegantoappearinthe
2、averagehome,therateofcrimescommittedbytocnagersinthecountryofAltahassteadilyincreased・Thisincreaseinteenogecrimeparallelstheincreaseinvioleneeshownontelevision.Accordingtoseveralnationalstudies,evenveryyoungchildrenwhowatchagreatnumberoftelevisionshowsfea
3、turingviolentscenesdisplaymoreviolentbehaviorwithintheirhomeonvironmontthandochildrenwhodonotwatchviolentshows・Furthermore,inasurveyconductedbytheObserver,over90percentofthercspondcnlswereparentswhoindicatedthatprime-timetelevision--programsthatcireshownb
4、etween7p.in.and9p.m・shouldshowlessviolence・Therefore,inordertolowertherateofteenagecrimeinAlta,televisionviewersshoulddemandthattelevisionprogrammersreducetheamountofviolenceshownduringprimetime.Theauthorofthiseditorialstatesthattherateofteenagecrimeinthe
5、countryofAltahasincreasedalongwiththeincreaseinviolenceshownontelevision,beginningwiththe1950’swhentelevisionwasintroducedintheaveragehome・Inaddition,theauthorstatesthatseveralnationalsurveyshaveshownlhatyoungchildrenwatchingviolenttelevisionprogramsarcmo
6、repronetoviolencethanchildrenwhodonot.Thewritealsosaysthatasurveyindicatedthatninetypercentofparentsrespondingsaidthatprime-timeprogramsshouldshowlessviolenee.Finally,theauthorcomestotheconelusionthattolowertherateofteenagecrimeinAlta,televisionwatcherssh
7、oulddemandareductioninviolenceshownduringprimetime・Thisargumentsuffersfromseveralcriticalfallacies・Firstly,thewriterequatestherateofincreaseinteenagecrimeinAltatotheincreaseinvioleneeshownontelevisionbutgivesnocausallinkageotherthanthesimilartimeperiods・T
8、heauthormakesnodistinctionbetweentypesofcrimes-whethertheyareviolentornonviolentcrimesbyteenagers・Furthermore,thereareseveralpossiblealternativecausesfortheincreaseinteencrimes・Forexample,perhapsal1typesofcrimeshave
