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1、GivingadviceWriting1.Reviewhowtoexpressadvice.2.Polishaparagragh.3.Writeaparagragh.Tasks1.Whynot(do)…2.Whydon’tyou(do)…3.You’dbetter(do)…4.Youshould/can/could/need(do)…5.How/Whataboutdoing?6.Wouldyouminddoing…7.Youaresupposedto(do)…8.IfIwereyou,Iwould(do)…9.V-ing…ishelpful.10.It’shelpfulforyout

2、o(do)……11.It’sagoodideaforyouto(do)……Topic1:learnEnglishTopic2:relaxTask2:ReviewhowtoexpressadviceAlice，IfeelmoreandmorestressedoutinJuniorThree.First,Istudyhard,butIstillcan’tgetgoodgrades.Then,Ioftenhaveheadachesandfeelsleepy,soIcan’tconcentrateonmystudy.Besides,myparentsdon’tunderstandmeatal

3、l.TheyalwaysthinkI’mwastingtime.SometimesIevenarguewiththem.Thatmakesusunhappy.Doyouhavethesameproblems?Ineedyourhelp.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon．Yours,LiuMingTask2:Polishaparagraph①②③…Firstofall,youcanaskteachersforhelp.Second,youcantakeexercise.Inmyopinion,takingexercisecanmakeyouto

4、energeticbecauseyouwon’tfeelsleepy.It’shelpfultoyourhealth.It’shelpfultoyourstudy.Third,youcangetaparttimejobandmakesomemoney.Finally,you’dbettertounderstandyourparents.….Task2:Polishaparagraph1.要点：齐全enough2.内容：建议合理、具说服力reasonable/3.结构：文段连贯、逻辑4.语法：标点词句准确correct5.语言：词句多样colorful作文修改对照评价表Task2:Po

5、lishaparagraphconvincingcoherent/logicalLetter1:…Inmyteacher’seyes,IamcertainlyagoodstudentinEnglishlearning.Ilisteninclassandfinishhomeworkintime.ButI’mnothappywiththeresults…Letter2:…IlikewatchingTVinmyfreetime.Idon’tlikegoingouttoexercise.IalsolikeeatingpotatoesanddrinkingcolawhileIamwatchin

6、gTV.IamfatnowandIhavefewfriends.Couldyougivemesomeadvice?...Task3:WritingDear________,I’msorrytohearyouareintroublenow.Icanunderstandyourfeeling.Don’tworry.Herearesomeadviceforyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

7、_______________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicewouldbehelpful.LilinGiveadvice一、自评参考表Evaluatethewriting.1.要点：是否齐全2.内容：建议是否合理、具有说服力3.结构：文段是否连贯、逻辑4.语法：标点词句是否准确5.语言：词句是否多样6书