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1、•题目:Thetraffichasbecomeoneofthemajorproblemsinthecities・Somepeoplethinkthatthisproblemcanbesolvedbytelecommutingfromhome・Whatisyouropinion?Canyousuggestotherssolutions?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.（
2、每篇作文都有这个指令，请注意。）Writeatleast250words.范文：Itiscertainlytruethattodaytrafficincitiesthroughouttheworldhasbecomeamajorproblem.Thisisobviousfromthenumberofvehiclesonourroad^andjbeamountofpollutiontheycause.Probablythetrafficproblemisduetoindividualstravellinaf
3、oriIworiGsfudvorshoppinapurposeandthisisevidentintherushhoursweexperienceeve/ymorningandevening.Itisalsotruethat,thesedays,suchdailycommutingisnotalwaysnecessarybecausepeoplecandothesethingsfromhome・WecanseethisintheoptionsInformationTechnologygivesustoda
4、y.
5、Forinstanee,onlinework,distancelearning
6、andshoppingfacilitiesareallavailableviatheInterFi^E]However,evenifeveryonehadaccesstothetechnologyandtheopportunitytoworkfromhome,itisunrealistictothinkthateveryonewouldwantto.Eventhoughthetechnologyforworking，st
7、udyingorshoppingon-linemakesthisoptionapossibility,neverthelessitwouldmeanpeoplehadlessfreedomofchoiceandlesssocialcontactintheirlives・Thiswouldhavea
8、large
9、impactonsocietyasawhole.So,inconelusion,Ithinkthatwhilethispracticecouldreducethetrafficproblemsino
10、urcities,itismostunlikelytobeanacceptablesolution.
11、lntermsofothersolutions,perhapsweneedtothinkmorecarefullyaboutfacilitatingpublicMansport日limitingprivatecarsinourcitycenters.工hedevelopmentofpublictranspoitthatisnot
12、road・based,sue”as妙vtrainsorsubwa血would
13、probablybeamoreacceptablyalternativemeasureto@ducejamsonourroads.]一、写作思路（1・对比；2.辩证思维4■角相关论证+重要的相关例证）考生突破了国内学生所习惯的写作竝。仔细比较之后发现该考生破题关键处使用的句型基本都是剑桥雅思1和剑桥雅思2官方范文常用的句型（该考生2005年参加雅思考试，可供参考的范文只有剑桥雅思前三册范文）o主体段落首先是回应了"telecommutingfromhome"这种缓解交通压力的观点，肯定了其合理之处（这是符
14、合人类知识和事实的）。写作时很注意”程度控制”，使用了"suchdailycommutingisnotalwaysnecessary”这种巧妙的处理方法。符合事实，同时为下文留下了论证空间。同时加以例证，满足雅思大作文要求的同时也增加了说服力,还增加了字数（LOL哈哈）。第三段采用了议论文惯用的伎俩（体现了辩证思维）：指出其不合理之处。需要提醒大家的是：议论文的行文就像一场辩论赛，驳斥的是不合理之处并加以例证，目的就是说服别人
