雅思写作辅导--经典案例分析

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1、典型失败案例：Topic1-Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried？　　Thistopicisveryinteresting.I’mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseI’malsoacollegestudentandI’mnotmarried……　　修改方案：观点模糊态度暧昧　　典型失败案例：Topic-Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried？　　Ithinkthistopicisveryhar

2、dtosay.BecauseIamstillverylittle，only17，andnotmarried，sothistopicisverydifficultforme……　　“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕　　典型失败案例：Topic1-Thehappiestmomentinyourlife　　Inourlife，therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily……　　Topic2-Thepopulationproblem　　Thepopulationpro

3、blemisaverybigproblem.Forexample，inthecitycentersofShanghai，wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.　　Topic3-Istherefairnessintoday’sbusinessworld？　　Ithinkintoday’ssociety，thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample，IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings……　　“见官死”开头之三：偏离主题

4、无轨电车　　典型失败案例：Topic-Itissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement？(雅思真题)　　Ithinktosuccess，wemusthavealotofimportantqualities.Tohavetheseimportantqualities，wemustle

5、arnalotofthings，forexample，English，musictools，andetc.Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers，ourfriendsandfrombooks.Allinall，wecanlearnfrommanyplaces.　　“见官死”开头之四：开门见山直奔主题　　Inmyopinion，itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried。　　Topic2-Willmoderntechnology

6、，suchastheInternet，everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation？(雅思真题)　　Ok，thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First，letmetellyouastory：Ihaveafriend，helikesgoontheinternetverymuch.Everyday，heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmo

7、reimportantinourdailylife.　　“见官死”开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹　　典型失败案例：Topic-Ifchildrenbehavebadly，shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished？(雅思真题)　　Aboutthisproblem，mythinkisifchildrenbehavebadly，thenparentsarenotright.Becauseteachchildisparent’sresponsibility.Sowealsopunis

8、hparentstoobesideschildrenisalsoshould.　　“见官死”开头之六：过分简单没有重点　　典型失败案例：Topic-Theimportanceof