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1、中考英语书面表达常见错误分析(一)审题错误要点领悟与汉语作文一样,英语书面表达的审题也十分重要。审题包括此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。由于英语书而表达的篇幅很有限,所以要求作者在写作时要精心组织材料,紧扣主题。信息提示太白山是陕西著名的森林游览胜地。一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)o不过,游览太白山的最佳时机是春天。每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前來踏青观光。可儿年前,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草,猎杀野鸟,点火野餐,致使环境一度恶化。请你写篇报道
2、,说明太白山旅游环境的变化。习作实况TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialseenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,thedaysgetlongerand1cmgerandtheweathergetwarmerandwarmer.Treesarebeginningtoturngreen,andflowerscomeou
3、t.Everythingbeginstogrow(1).Themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Ttissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment・Theyusedtoth
4、rowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Theydon,tknowthatcleanersworkfrommorningtillnighttosweepawaytherubbishandwastethings(2).Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttocookfood.Ho
5、wdangerousitwas!Luckilyenough,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere-Newroadsandnicehotelshavebeenbuilt;trecsandflowersareplantcdarounclthem.Visitorsareaskedtotakeplasticbagsandputtheirrubbishinthem(3).精讲点拨(
6、1)这一部分应当删掉。文章应围绕太白山景区的景色和环境保护主题展开,与太白山有关的春景可以略写,但不宜用太多的笔墨去描绘春天,这不仅加长了篇幅,也冲淡了主题。(2)这一部分也应当删掉。因为,这里批评了游客乱扔垃圾的不良现象,由于篇幅的限制,没有必要再去谈论清洁工是如何清理这些垃圾的。(3)这一部分同样需耍删掉。根据上文不难看出,本文主要谈论太白山旅游区的环境污染问题,以及政府采取措施后环境的变化。没有必要去描述基础设施的变化。总而言之,英文作文屮,应特别注意避免想起什么写什么,随意发挥,淡化主题。精彩例文Taibai
7、MountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithagreatmanygreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers・Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomeherean
8、denjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperonthe