中考英语复习专题：书面表达常见错误分析

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1、中考英i吾复习专题：书面表达常见错误分析（一）文不站「要点领悟」在英语书面表达的提示信息中，常有这样的语句“可适当增加细节”或“可适当发挥”，但所增加的内容应该与文章相关。如果所“发挥”的内容与文章无关，就是“画蛇添足”了。「信息提75J根据下面的4幅图画用英语写一篇短文，要求故事包括所有图画的主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使意思连贯。词数在100以上。「习作实况」Oneday,anoldwomanwascrossingthestreetwithabasketinherhand・Shewenttodosomeshopping・Justthenacarcameupands

2、hewasknockeddownontotheground・Shewasbadlyinjuredandcouldn'tmove・Buttoeveryone，sanger,thecarranawayasquicklyasitcould・Theoldwomanhadtolieonthegroundandcried(1)。Luckily,aman,whowassweepingthestreetnearby,sawthis・Heranquicklyuptoherandhelpedherstandup.Hewasangrywiththedriver(2)oThenhetookh

3、ertothenearesthospita1.Thereadoctorexaminedhercarefullyandgavehersomemedicalcare・Afterthat,thedustmantookherhomc.Whentheoldwoman"sdaughterknewwhathadhappenedtohermother,shewasmoveddeeplyandthankedhimverymuch.Afterawhilethedustmanleftandwenttodohiswork・Thedaughterthankedhimagain(3)o「精讲点拨

4、」(1)此句与图中提示不相符，应删去。(2)此处加写这句属多余，也与图画内容不符。(3)文章写到“……verymuch."处已经很完整了，加上这一句使行文显得重复、累赘。「精品范文」Oneday,anoldwomanwascrossingthestreetwithabasketinherhand・Shewenttodosomeshopping・Justthenacarcameupandshewasknockeddownontotheground・Shewasbadlyinjuredandcouldn'tmovealittlc.Luckily,aman,whowassw

5、eepingthestreetnearby,sawthis・Heranquicklyuptoherandhelpedherstandup.Thenhetookhertothenearesthospita1.Thereadoctorexaminedhercarefullyandgavehersomemedicalcare・Afterthat,thedustmantookherhome・Whentheoldwoman?sdaughterknewwhathadhappenedtohermother,shewasmoveddeeplyandthankedhimverymuch

6、.中考英语二$&专题：书面表达常见$解分析(二)名词单复数「要点领悟」同学们在写作时，往往把重点放在文章的构思和句子结构上，有时忽略了名词的单复数。在中考作文中，如果名词的数使用混乱，也会导致较多的失分。「信息提示」假如你是吴强，去年春天和几位同学到东浦岛野餐，以“Thehappiestday"为题写一篇80-100词的作文。要求条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点规范。「习作实况」ThehappiestdayLastspringmyclassmate(1)andIwenttoDongpuIslandtohaveapicnic.ItwasMarch2.Theweathe

7、rwasfineandtherewashardlyacloudinthesky.Westartedearlythatmorning.Weallcarriedsomethingnicetoeatanddrink・Wesanghappilyonourways(2)there・Afteraboutoneandahalfhour(3),wegottotheisland.Thewaterinthelakewasniceandcleanandwecouldseeflowersandgrasses(4)allaroundus.Howbeautifulitwas!A