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1、Deareditor,Wehavesubstantiallyrevisedourmanuscriptafterreadingthecommentsbythetworeviewers.Thestructureofthepaperwasadjustedaccordinglyafterwerewrotetheabstractandtheintroduction.Thedataofexperimentswerealsoexpandedinthecurrentversionforreviewers,sug

2、gestion.Andherewedidnotlistthechangesbecausefewsentenceswerekeptoriginally.Thenewversionissubmitted・Weappreciateyourconsideratesuggestionandearnestcomments.Wehopethatthecorrectionandadjustmentcouldmeettherequirement.Bestregardandwishes・Answertoreview

3、ers:Reviewer#1:1Itisstronglyrecommendedthatthismanuscriptneedstobewritteninamoreformallymannerandusinggrammaticallycorrectsentences・Answer:Wearesorryforournegligenceofgrammarerrors.Allthesentenceswerecheckedandwetriedourbesttominimizetheincorrectphra

4、ses・1Theauthorneedstomakeclearstatementsoftheirresearchobjectivesandtheintroductoryshouldemphasizemoreontheirstudy'sobjectives.Answer:Accordingtothecomments,theobjecthavebeenemphasizedinthesectionsofabstractandintroduction.2Theauthormightalsoconsider

5、describing/comparingmethods/observationsusedinpreviousstudies.Bydoingso,itwouldgivethereadersabetterpictureoftheircurrentdevelopedmethod・Answer:TherelatedpreviousstudiesaboutOPA,OSAandOMAwereaddedintheintroductionsection.3Theauthorsneedtoreconsiderre

6、-arrangingsectionsandsub-sectionsofthismanuscript.Sections2.0(Insituobservingsystem)and3.0(DigitalInlineHolographysystem)couldbemergedassub-sectionsofsection4.0(Materials&methods).Findingsofthemethod/studyshouldbereorganizedandmergedintoResultsanddis

7、cussionsections.Overall,thismanuscriptmaybeacceptableaftermajorrevisions.Answer:Thestructurehavebeenadjustedaccordingly・4Specificcomments:Page4,Lines74-76:Theauthorsshouldrephrasetheselinesasitcouldcausemisunderstandingandmisleadinginformationtothere

8、aders・Answer:Thissentencehasbeendeleted・5Thereareseveralmethodswhicharecommonlyappliedforremoval/recoveryofoilduringcleanupi.e.;physical,chemicalandbiologicalmethodssuchasin-situburning,absorptionpads,snares,additionofmicrobesandnutrients,chemicaldis