概要写作Summarywriting

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1、概要写作Summarywriting高考新题型提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性(3)上下文的连贯性(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况概要写作Whatisagoodsummary?概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）：1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇3.完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑contents(内容)languageskills(语言)structure(结

2、构)Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldn’tlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-aw

3、aysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearth’sresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswas

4、tefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycan’tweactbeforethishappens?Whycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?（182W）Step1.Understandthewholepassageandgraspthekeypoints.概要写作难点1Howtogetthekeypoi

5、ntsquicklyandcorrectly?(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息Para1：Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.detailedexample忽略具体事例topicsentence概要写作难点2Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwo

6、rdsproperly?(如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)characteristicsOnceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.___________________,industrialgoodsweremade_____________________.Sometimeago;Inthepast;Decadesagotobeusedforalongtimetofunctionwellforalongtime;durable近义词替换Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.D

7、ecadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable.spentmuchmoneyontreasuretreatitkindlyYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Para1.useitcarefullyNowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatprodu