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1、PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例LiYing'SHobbyLiYing1ikesEnglishverymuch.Sheworkshardatit.ShereadsEnglisheverymorning.She1ikesspeakingEnglish.Sheoften1istenstotheradio.ShewatchesTVonlyonSaturdayevening.Doesshe1ikedancing?No,shedoesn"Butshe1ikesdrawingandsinging.Herparentsloveher.Andallth
2、eteachersandherfriendslikeher,too.Shesaysherhobbiesmakeherhappy.Don'tbeagainstthetrafficrulesIgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.Igotoschoolbybikeat7:30inthemorning.Imustcrosstwobusyroads•Ifthetrafficlightisredoryellow,1know1can"tcrosstheroad,so1wait.Ifthelightturnsgreen,1knowitm
3、eans“Go”,andthenIwalkacrosstheroad.Ialwaysrideontherightsideoftheroad•1amneveragainstthetrafficrules.ILoveMyFamilyHereisaphotoIfmyfamily.Thesearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,mybrotherandI.Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospitalfaraway.Hegoestoworkbysubway.Mymo
4、therisateacher.Sheworksinaschoolnearmyhome-Shegoestoworkbybike.Afterwork,they1ikereadingbooks.Whoisthetai1boy?Heismybrother.Heisfiveyearsolderthanme.Heisasinger.He,snowinBeijing.Hegoestherebyplane.Ilovemyfamily.【要领点评】一个平凡的题材,一篇生动的作文。这样的命题,我们可能面对几次,甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧,了了数言,
5、让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上,很值得我们去思考,我们能做到吗?小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外,在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说,将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍,后分说,把家人的工作、上班方式,爱好一i细说。最后以一句话进行概括,起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?HowtogettothesciencemuseumWearegoingtothescieneemuseumtomorrow.ThereisanoldthingshowintheMuseum.Doyouknowhowwecangettothesciencemuseum?T
6、hescieneemuseumisnexttothePeople'sPark.It'sisn'tfarfromourschool.Sowecangothereonfoot.Walkstraighttothewestfromourschool,nextturnloftatthepostofficeandwalkforabout5minutes,thenturnrightattrafficlights.YoucanfindthePeople'sParkonlheright.Wa1kstraight,andyou'11seethescieneemu
7、seum.【要领点评】这篇作文的题Fl是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢?通过你的叙述,能让别人很容易找到博物馆,这应是最基木的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢?首先他写了去博物馆的位置,最后浓墨重彩,指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线,这条路线够清晰吧!小朋友们在写这类作文的时候,总有些无从卞手的感觉,不知从何说起。其实介绍路线,无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点,还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚,你口己首先得清楚,然后再通过自己的叙述,将路线清清楚楚得呈现出來。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方,如在哪儿转弯,向哪儿转,经过哪
8、些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样,你就能说清,别人也能弄明白。PlantingTreesIt'sspring.It'stimetoplanttrees.Iw
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