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1、典型失败案例:Topic1-Shouldcol1egestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?Thistopicisveryinteresting.1,mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseI'malsoacollegestudentandI,mnotmarried修改方案:开门见山直奔主题nmyopinion,itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarriedoTopic2-Willmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet
2、,everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinfonneition?(雅思真题)Ok,thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First,letmetellyouastory:Thaveafriend,he1ikesgoontheinternetverymuch.Everyday,heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Topic3-Theimportanc
3、eofenvironmentalprotectionOh,thistopicissurelyveryimportant.Isn'tit?Ofcourse!It"sreallyveryveryimportant!“见官死”开头之二:屮式英文人见人晕(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)典型失败案例:Topic1-ThehappiestmomentinyourlifeTnour1ife,therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrilyTopic2-ThepopulationproblemThepopulationproblemisav
4、erybigproblem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.Topic3-Istherefairnessintoday,sbusinessworld?Ithinkintoday"ssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythingsTopic4-TheadvantageofbeinganicepersonBeinganicepersonhav
5、emanyadvantage.Tbelieveifapeoplealwaysdobadthings,hewillget“baoying”•“见官死”开头Z三:观点模糊态度暧昧(喷血指数:☆☆☆)典型失败案例:Topic-Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?1thinkthistopicisveryhardtosay.Because1amstillverylittle,only17,andnotmarried,sothistopicisverydifficultforme“见官死”开头之四:偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆)典型失败案例:T
6、opicTtissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?(雅思真题)Ithinktosuccess,wemusthavealotofimportantqualities.Tohavetheseimportantqualities,wemustlearna1otofthings,forexample,English,musictoo
7、ls,andetc.Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers,ourfriendsandfrombooks.Allinall,wecanlearnfrommanyplaces.“见官死”开头之五:语法错误惨不忍睹(喷血指数:☆☆☆)典型失败案例:Topic-Ifchildrenbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibili