作文讲评(初一二单元 有范文)

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1、初一英语作文讲评Unit2Thisismysister.作文评讲话题：介绍你的家庭成员，可以从外形特征、工作、性格、爱好等方面描写。great-grandfather（外）曾祖父great-grandmother（外）曾祖母great-aunt叔、伯祖母great-uncle叔、伯祖父mother-in-law婆婆岳母father-in-law公公岳父sister-in-law嫂子，弟妹，小姑brother-in-law大伯，小叔，姐夫，妹夫son-in-law女婿daughter-in-law媳妇step-mother继母step-father继父wi

2、fe妻子husband丈夫couple夫妇nephew侄子niece侄女grandson孙子granddaughter孙女great-grandson（外）曾孙great-granddaughter（外）曾孙女ExtendedWords作文评讲问题：1、正确书写没有掌握。Thisismyfather.heisateacher.heistall.Ihaveaphotoofmyfamily,thereare3people,theyaremyfather,motherandI,myfatherisadoctor...问题：句子开头没有大写问题：一“逗”到底问题

3、：2、中文式英文。Iverylikemyfamily.2)Theleftmanismyfather.正确：Ilikemyfamilyverymuch.正确：Themanontheleftismyfather.作文评讲问题：3、基础的语言错误。hehairisblack.2)Myfatherlikereadbooks.正确：Hishairisblack.正确：Myfatherlikesreadingbooks.作文评讲问题：4、文章无结尾。5、文章太长、言多必失。作文评讲好的开头：1.I’mveryhappytointroducemyfamilytoyou

4、.Thisisaphotoofmyfamily,andIwanttointroducethemtoyou.Ihaveahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinit.作文评讲好的结尾：1.Whatahappy/nicefamilyIhave!Everyoneinmyfamilyloveseachother,andweliveahappylife.IlovemyfamilyandIamproudofthem.作文评讲1.Appearance(外形):1)betall/short/slim(苗条的)/heavy/thin/beautiful/

5、handsome...2)havelong/short/blackhair3)wearglasses...eg.Myfatherisverytall,andhealwayswearsthickglasses.作文评讲2.job（工作）:1)ateacher/doctor/manager/reporter...2)anactor/astronaut(宇航员)/artisteg.Myfatherisateacher.作文评讲3.Personality(性格):1)bekind/friendly/lovely/easygoing（随和的）/outgoing（外

6、向的）...2)bestrictwithsb.(对某人要求严格)eg.Myfatherisveryfriendly,butheisstrictwithme.作文评讲4.Hobbies（爱好）:1)likeswatchingTV/playingfootball/goingshopping/cooking...eg.Myfatherlikesreadingbooksverymuch.作文评讲作文评讲优点：1、书写工整、卷面整洁，表扬全班所有同学。2、文中内容完整、描述清楚。3、1/3的同学尝试用一些较高级的句式：如定语从句，或分词作定语等。Example:H

7、ello,everyone!I’mgladtointroducemyfamilytoyou.Thismanwithshortandblackhairismyfather.Healwayswearstheglasses.Heisateacher.Yes,theladyinyellowismymother.Sheisbeautifulandkind.Sheworksinacompany.Weoftengoforawalkinourneighborhoodafterdinner.Weallloveeachother.Asmallfamily佳作欣赏Abigfa

8、milyThisisapictureofmybigfamily.Theoldsi