3 How to Write Good Sentences

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1、HowtoWriteGoodEnglishSentenceNameofthecourse:ahandbookofwritingStudents:freshmanofmajorEnglishAim:learntowritenativespeakers’sentencesImportance:thecomparisonbetweenthetwosentencesineachpairDifficulty:thecomparisonbetweenthetwosentencesineachpairTeachingprocess:

2、Ⅰ.Thecomparisonbetweenthetwosentencesineachpair1.Theartist'sworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel.改进：Artists'workupgradesourcivilization.2.Forexample,youworkinabigfactory.改进:Supposeyouworkinabigfactory.3.You'llfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmainjob

3、.改进：You'llfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourcareer.4.Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck.改进:Wewillgetnowhereifwerelyonluck.5.Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel.改进:Hewillgetahighersalary,thusimprovinghislife.6.Theirbrainisstillveryyou

4、ng.改进:Theyarestillimmature.7.Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings.改进:Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter.8.Theycan'tanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong.改进:Theycannottellrightfromwrong.9.Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtim

5、e.改进:Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime.10.Thoughitisnotthebestjob,itaffordtohislife.改进:Thoughitisnotthebestjob,ajobisajob.Hecanmakeendsmeetwithit.11.Sincepeoplearealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththeirpresentsituation,theywantfurtherdevelopment.改进:Sincepeoplearene

6、versatisfiedwiththeirstatusquo,theywantfurtherdevelopment.12.Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobwhichcaneasilygetbigmoney.改进:Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobthatcanbringthembigmoney.13.Theylikeanactivelifebutnotapeacefullife.改进:Theylikeanactiveliferathertha

7、napeacefulone.14.Somecigarettesmayevencostalargersumofmoney.改进:Somecigarettesmaycostevenmore.15.Firstly,dissatisfactionencouragesthediscoveryofnewproducts.改进:Firstly,dissatisfactionencouragestheinventionofnewproducts.16.Inordertosuittheneedsofenteringintowork,st

8、udentsmustgraspsometechnicalskills.改进:Inordertomeettheneedsoffuturework,studentsmustlearnsomepracticalskills.17.Itisverynecessarymorequalifiedscientistsandtechnicians