高分满分作文借鉴

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1、名校高分满分作文借鉴话题一：旅游／风俗习惯外国友人来信咨询在北京要注意的风土人情和文化习俗，请你写一封回信介绍并提醒他在北京需要注意的风俗习惯并如何得体的表现，包括打招呼、餐桌礼仪及家庭法则。提示词：Greetingtablemannershomerules范文一：（101中学15分）HowtobehavewhenwearetravellingNowadays,moreandmoreChinesepeopleprefertotravelaroundtheworld.TheybringtheChinesetraditionalvirt

2、ueabroad,butatthesametime,someoftheirbehaviorsreallydamageChinesereputationintheworld.It’snecessaryforustolearnhowtobehavewhenwe’retravelling.Aboveall,we’resupposedtobecivilizedwhilevisitingfamousplaces.Insteadofdoingboringthingslikecuttingnamesonhistoricalsites,listen

3、ingtotheguidesareencouragedinordertoshowourrespectforthecountry.It’salsoabadbehaviortotakephotossecretlywithoutpermission.Intherestaurant,it’simpolitetotalkwithfriendsloudly,whichmayannoyothers.Whydon’twelearnsomepolitewordsinforeignlanguageandtrytocommunicatewithlocal

4、people?Thisreallyhelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingaboutdifferentcultures.Whyarewesupposedtodoso?Goodmannersmakeourtourmorecomfortableandpleasant.Asweallwanttohaveaharmoniousenvironmenttolivein,politebehaviorsleaveagoodimpressiononeverybody’sheart.OurcoursesaresymbolofC

5、hina,andeachChineseshouldpayhisowneffort.（189字）点评：整体看，作者运用长句的能力很强，而且文章的组织性很强，内容很充实，全篇无语法错误再加上高级的长句运用，当然必须满分。1.开篇内容很充实，有标黄长句，用词地道，搭配贴切，给评委很好的第一印象。2.中间标红句子运用without这一小词非常地道。3.结尾部分也有标黄长句，再次形成前后呼应，开头结尾都有高级长句坐镇，所以文章从内容从形式上都是一流水准。实用借鉴词组及句型：1.bringtheChinesetraditionalvirtuea

6、broad把中国美德带到国外2.damageChinesereputationintheworld破坏中国在国际上的名声3.haveabetterunderstandingof…更好掌握…4.it’salsoabadbehaviorto…=wearenotsupposedto…不建议做某事5.wanttohaveaharmoniousenvironmenttolivein想要有一个和谐的生存环境6.besymbolofsth.是某事的象征101.sth.leaveagoodimpressiononeverybody’sheart.某

7、事在某人心中留下好的印象2.insteadofdoingsth,doingsth.isencouragedinorderto…与其做某事（不好的事）…做某事（好事）是值得鼓励的，因为这样可以（后加好处）范文二：（101中学15分）HowtobeacivilizedtouristFromtimetotimeitwasreportedthatChinesetouristbehavebadlywhentravelling.Itseemsparticularlyimportanttotelleveryonehowtobeacivilized

8、touristnow.Firstofall,weareobligatedtoactproperly,orrather,bepoliteandfollowlocalruleswhentravelling.Obviously,litter