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1、ExerciseII:YouarestudyingatuniversityandyourEnglishteacherhasaskedherstudentstowriteandsuggestwaysinwhichshecouldimproveherteaching.Writealettertothelecturer.Saywhatyouenjoyaboutherlecturesandsuggesthowtheycouldbeimproved.LetterswrittenbystudentsExample1:Dearteacher,Thankyouforyourtrusting
2、.Itismypleasuretogiveyousomeadvice,thoughitisatoughworkforme.becauseyouareaperfectEnglishteacher.However,therearestillsometipsyouneedtoknow.Firstofall,youshouldselectagoodtextbook,asweallknow,Agoodbookislikeagoodteacher.Thebookthatweareusingnowisoutdatedanduseless.Secondly,youshouldtellstu
3、dentstoutilizeproperlycomputertostudyEnglish.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleacquireknowledgethroughinternet.Thirdly,youshouldletstudentsgetintothehabitoflookingforadictionary.Thisdictionaryworkisveryimportant,becauseithelpsyoudevelopafeelforwordsandtheircollations.Ihopeyouwillfindthemusefulhelpf
4、ul!Bestwishes!YoursincerelyXXComments:(Overallimpression:Poorstructure,poorcontentsandpoorlanguage)1.Payattentiontothestructureofletter:Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,PoliteClosing.Herethereisnoclearintroduction,mainbody,conclusionandseparatepoliteclosingpart.2.Inthemainbodypart,youshoul
5、dfirstwritewhatyoulikeaboutthelecture.Herenodetailsgiven,only“becauseyouareaperfectEnglishteacher.”3.Inthesuggestionpart,payattentiontothelanguageyouuse.Youshouldavoidusing“Youshoulddo….”“Youcando…..”.Instead,useexpressionssuchas“Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif….”,“I’dliketosuggestthat….”,“
6、Idofeelthatyoucould…..”4.DearMr./Ms.LastName:(Useaformalsalutationnotafirstnameunlessyouknowthepersonwell).Example:“DearMsChen”isbetterthan“DearTeacher”(Chinesegreeting)”.“Bestwishes”,“Sincerelyyours”botharepoliteending,choosejustonetouse.Example2Dearteacher,Iamveryhappytobeoneofyourstuden
7、ts.Iwriteinreplytoyourinvitationfromyourstudentstowriteandsuggestwaystoimproveyourteaching.IamveryinterestedinEnglish!Ofcourse,Ilikeyourlessonsomuch.Sinceyoutaughtus,IbecomemoreinterestedinEnglish.Iamverysatisfiedwithyou.YourspeakEnglishveryfluently,Ireallyadm
