HappyNewYear’sDay

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1、HappyNewYear’sDay作　　者：金素勤（八、四班）辅导教师：郑利榕单　　位：河南省淮滨县邓湾中学HappyNewYear’sDayJanuary1stisNewYear’sDay.It’sagreatdayforallthepeoplethroughouttheworld.Asthesayinggoes,Agoodbeginningishalfthebattle.So,manypeoplegoallouttocelebratetheimportantday.Onthatday,IwenttotheBookCitywithmyclassmates.W

2、eboughtalotofusefulreferencebooksandinterestingstorybooks.IbelieveKnowledgeispower.IhopeIcanlearnalotfromthesebooksandimprovemystudy.Intheevening,myfamilyhadabigdinnerparty.Allthemembersinmyfamilywishedmeagoodluckinthenewyear.教师评语：1、文章结构严谨，分析透彻；语言流畅，一气呵成。2、文章中正确运用了连接词，使文章联系紧密、自然。3、在

3、结构上，层次分明，让人一目了然。