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1、Everyonehasadream.Dreamsareakindofpowerforpeopletosuccess.JohanWolfgangvonGoethe,GermanPoetanddramatistsaid"Theimportantthinginlifeistohaveaataim,andthedeterminationtoattainit."Dreamsgivepeopleawaywhichistosuccessbyworkinghard.Finally,youmightbecomeamanofsuccess,
2、amanofvalue.Inmychildhood,Ihaveadreamtobecomeadoctorornurses.BecauseTheycanhelppeoplewhowasill.Peoplecalledthem"angleinwhite".Doctorscaneasepatients'painsevensavepeople'slife.Iwanttobecomethem.ThoughIstudyhardintheclassandlookforsomebooksaboutthem.Inmyseniorhighs
3、chool,IcanlookthoughmanyabookaboutMedicine.Ialsocanaskmyteacherforhelpaboutmedicalquestion.IlearnalotbutIalsofindmyweakness.Atthepresent.I'macollegestudent.IcanlearnmuchknowledgeandIhavemoreopportunitiestocometruemydream.IbelievethatIcanachievemydreambyworkinghar
4、d."K显示全部1.1Everyonehasadream.[教师点评][搭配统计]动名搭配have...dream在语料库中出现过2392次dream前面的动词分布,have后面的名词分布have...ambition,have...aspiration,take...dream好评报错1.2Dreamsareakindofpowerforpeopletosuccess.[教师点评][低频警示]powerforpeopletosuccess在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语好评报错[学习提示]易混词汇:kind,sort,
5、type,class,classification,category,species,variety均有“种，类，类型”之意。kind:指性质相同，而且特征很相似，足以归为一类的人或东西。sort:普通用词，文体较kind随便，指对人或对事物进行的大概分类，有时含贬义。type:指客观界限比较清楚，有相同本质特点的同类事物，或指大致相似的同类事物。class:正式用词，指门类、种类或优劣等级；用于指动植物的分类时，表示“纲”。classification:指根据已经确定的类型对某一实物作鉴别和归类。category:书面
6、用词，特指有确切定义的群体。species:书面用词，单复数同形。指生物分类上的种。variety:强调有各自的特点，形式不同，品质不同的种类。好评报错1.3JohanWolfgangvonGoethe,GermanPoetanddramatistsaid"Theimportantthinginlifeistohaveaataim,andthedeterminationtoattainit."[教师点评][句子错误]本句语法不规范，请检查！好评报错[高分词汇]important是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为高分词汇c
7、rucial或essentialcrucial:extremelyimportant/critical:Itiscrucialthatthereportshouldbeontimeessential:(something)veryimportant/indispensable:Itisessentialthatyoushouldtakeoutaproperinsurance.Itisessentialfortheapplicanttowearadarksuit.好评报错[语法检查]请检查aat(Wrongarticle)
8、好评报错[学习提示]易混词汇:aim,goal,purpose,end,target,object,objective均有“目标，目的”之意。aim:从本义“靶子”引申而来，侧重比较具体而明确的目标，但常指短期目标。goal:指经过考虑和选择，需经坚持不懈的努力奋斗才能达到的最终目标。purpose:普通用词，既指以
