资源描述：
《Responsibility of the young generation》由会员上传分享，免费在线阅读，更多相关内容在教育资源-天天文库。
1、ResponsibilityoftheyounggenerationResponsibilityisnotjustavirtue,butalsoavitalpeculiarity.Thesenseofresponsibilityisthewheelsofsocialprogress;nevertheless,varietyofyouthishavingtroublewiththeirresponsibilities.Youthpeopleshouldbesupposedtobeaboundedinvigorandvitality.Theyshouldbe
2、idealisticratherthanconsumerist.Theyshouldcareabouttheirnation,societyandfamilywhicharesignificantforthem.Theyshouldberesponsiblefortheirparents,careerandtheirbehavior.However,someyoungpeopleuseupmostoftimehangingoutandenteringonlinegames.What’smore,theyalsospendquantityofmoneywh
3、ichisfromtheirparents.Youthoughttokeephighlyhistoricalsenseofresponsibility,bearandgratefulheart,havingteamcooperationconsciousnessandenterprise.Responsibilityisthefutureofyouthnotorsomething.Itcanpromptthemworkhard;moreover,itcanalsohelptheyounggenerationdevelopagreatattitudetot
4、heirnation,society,andfamily.Itmeanstheywillhavestrongsenseofconfidenceandthesenseofmissionandgreatenthusiasm.85.5词汇:句子:篇章结构:内容相关:排名:共6篇,本文排名4，最高分87,最低分85评语：拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用类型维度测量值参考范围词汇形符数198195~230字数172166~208类符数10593~115平均词长5.104.
5、23~4.97平均词长标准差2.952.19~2.62高频词汇占比72%77%~86%学术词汇占比6%2%~7%超纲词汇占比11%3%~8%篇章连词98~14动词短语127~17段落段落数33~5平均每段句数4.002.49~5.52平均每段词数66.0036.91~89.70首段词数占比18%12%~43%尾段词数占比29%6%~40%首段句数占比17%11%~44%尾段句数占比25%8%~41%句子句子数1211~17平均句长1613~20最长句词数2921~37最短句词数84~101~9词句子占比8%5%~32%10~19词句子占比66%39%~7
6、0%20~29词句子占比25%6%~36%残句数00~1病句数00~3从句从句总数79~17从句类型34~6不定式11~5现在分词40~4过去分词00~1主语从句00~2补语从句01~5wh-从句00~4关系从句20~3词性连词9%3%~6%名词27%17%~24%动词17%16%~22%副词7%5%~8%形容词14%15%~20%介词11%8%~12%代词7%6%~12%标点10%10%~14%按句点评标签详解1.1Responsibilityisnotjustavirtue,butalsoavitalpeculiarity.·[教师点评]·[低频警示
7、]vital...peculiarity在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语好评报错·[学习提示]易混词汇:quality,property,feature,characteristic,peculiarity,trait,attribute,character均有“特性，特点，品质”之意。quality:最普通用词，既可指有形或无形的特性，又可指个性或共性的特征。properity:多指同类事物所共有的特性，一般不用于指人。feature:指事物突出引人注目的特点。多用来说明人的容貌特征或地理特征。characteristic:指某人或某物天生有别于他人或
8、他物的内部特质或外表特征。peculiarity:指人或事物独具的或奇怪的特点，
