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1、2011海淀一模作文讲解假设你刚刚参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动,请根据以下五幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文汇报,在班内介绍你们游学的过程。注意:1.汇报的开头和结尾已经为你写好。2.词数不少于60。内容-要点1.到达(受到欢迎、接机)2.入住(home-stayfamily、吃饭)3.学习(听讲座、了解大学)4.游览(BigBen、LondonEye)5.送别(farewellparty、唱歌、跳舞)内容-要点1.到达(受到欢迎、接机)2.入住(home-stayfamily、吃饭)3.学习(听讲座、了解大学)4.游览(BigBen、L
2、ondonEye)5.送别(farewellparty、唱歌、跳舞)结尾:对此次活动的总结。(两句话)内容细节1.到达(受到欢迎、接机)到达,热烈欢迎,握手,等待,分别去了不同的家庭(引出下图)arrivedat,werewarmlywelcomed,shookhands,hadbeenwaiting…,thenweseparatedtodifferenthome-stayfamilies.入住(home-stayfamily、吃饭)细节支持:吃英国美食,谈话聊天,聊天话题,气氛haddeliciousandtypicalfood
3、s,hadapleasanttalk,foodculture,culturaldifference,学习(听讲座、了解大学)细节支持:第二天,上课,听讲座,介绍WCollege,学习到了什么,attendedaclass,gaveintroductions,learnedalotabout…游览(BigBen、LondonEye)细节支持:参观了伦敦市各个景点;拍照,导游介绍,买纪念品,了解英国的历史城市文化visited…,throughthetourguide’sintroduction,Iknewmoreabout…whic
4、hIcouldnotlearnfrombookstookpictures,boughtsouvenirs,送别(farewellparty、唱歌、跳舞)细节支持谁举办了这个party,我们party上表演节目唱歌、跳舞,Theschoolheldafarewellparty…,wegaveperformance…danceandsongs结尾提高语言技能,加深对英国和英语文化的了解。improvedourspeakingskills,gotabetterunderstandingofBritishculture.主要问题时态混乱细
5、节缺失详略不当语言质量低注重平时的积累。没有速成。OnarrivingattheHeathrowAirportinLondon,Ireceivedawarmwelcomefrommyhome-stayfamily.Thewholefamily,acouplewiththeirlittleson,cametogreetmeinperson.Thatnight,theytreated(prepared)measuperbdinner.TheywerecuriousaboutwhatourlifeislikeinChinese,soIt
6、oldthemalotaboutChina.DuringmystayinLondon,thefamilywereveryhospitableandgotoutoftheirwaytohelpme.WewentintoschoolstolearnmoreaboutEnglandwhenIbenefitedalotfromtheteacher’slectures.TheteachergaveusavividandinterestingintroductionandwelearnedalotaboutWcollege.Meanwhile
7、,wewentsightseeingtoBigBenandLondonEye,whichweresplendidandleftmebreathless,Astheguidewasintroducingtheseplacesofinterests,wetookphotosandsomeofusboughtsouvenirs.Soonthetripwasending,andtheschoolinwhichwelearnedforthesedaysheldafarewellpartyforus.Weallparticipatedinan
8、ddidperformances.Somesangasong,othersdancedtoexpressoutappreciationtotheEnglishstudentsandteachers.无结尾12-14分作文吴雨晴侯依宁张嘉言张卓雅李畅