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1、高三鸡汤类的英语作文题解作者孙三五作文指导(2017届高三扬州期中考试)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Thefirstdayofschoolourprofessorintroducedhimselfandchallengedustogettoknowsomeonewedidn'talreadyknow.Istooduptolookaroundwhenagentlehandtouchedmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundtofindawrinkled,littleoldladybeamingu
2、patmewithasmilethatlitupherentirebeing.Shesaid,"Hihandsome.MynameisRose.I'meighty-sevenyearsold.CanIgiveyouahug"Ilaughedandenthusiasticallyresponded,"Ofcourseyoumay."andshegavemeagiantsqueeze."IalwaysdreamedofhavingacollegeeducationandnowI'mgettingone."Shetoldme.Afterc
3、lasswewalkedtothestudentunionbuildingandsharedachocolatemilkshake.Webecameinstantfriends.Everydayforthenextthreemonthswewouldleaveclasstogetherandtalknonstop.Iwasalwaysamazedatthis"timemachine"asshesharedherwisdomandexperiencewithme.AttheendofthesemesterweinvitedRoseto
4、speakatourfootballbanquet.I'llneverforgetwhatshetaughtus.Shewasintroducedandsteppeduptothepodium."Wedonotstopplayingbecauseweareold;wegrowoldbecausewestopplaying.You'vegottohaveadream.Whenyouloseyourdreams,youdie.Wehavesomanypeoplewalkingaroundwhoaredeadanddon'tevenkno
5、wit."……Attheyear'sendRosefinishedthecollegedegreeshehadbegunallthoseyearsago.OneweekaftergraduationRosediedpeacefullyinhersleep. [写作内容]1、以约30个词概括短文的要点;2、然后以约120个就“Dreamandeffort”这个主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:(1)谈谈你对Rose演讲内容的理解和感想。(2)结合实际谈谈你的梦想、具体困难和圆梦行动。我的感悟一、鸡汤类的作文题存在通用性这篇作文本质上就是写
6、梦想。其实dream和purpose,ideal,goal,ambition是一家的,下次换成谈谈goal,不要说没有写过。我们要做的就是,需要把鸡汤类的话题归类,不要做很多无用功。二、概括类的鸡汤文往往是记叙文,记住就一个公式:某人或某物做了某事。这篇文章涉及到两个人:Rose,IRose在本文做了四件事:87岁继续大学教育;和我分享个人经验和智慧;发表演讲;去世我在本文就做了一件事:成为Rose朋友这样一想就好办了:Rosecontinuedhercollegeeducationattheageof87.Roselikedtos
7、hareherexperienceandwisdomwithme.Rosemadeaninspringspeech.ImakegoodfriendswithRose.下面要做的就是把它们连在一起,我一再跟学生强调:概括类的文字务必要简洁,不要用复杂的句子,也不要用什么修辞。因为概括本身就是为了让读者一下子明白文章讲了什么。你要是想体现你的写作才华,就在下面的120词中发挥吧。Rose,87yearsold,continuedcollegeeducationandoftensharedexperienceandwisdomwithme
8、,herclosefriend.Thoughshediedsoonaftergraduation,herspeechimpressedeveryone.三、鸡汤类的作文,谈感想就两个:impressive,moved。谈理解,首先要具
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