5、、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 33 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 这是一些建议,希望对各位同学有帮助,能很好的通过下次的考试。二高分作文注意事项: 1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is, therefore,high time that some applicable
6、 approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说:Other individuals
7、, however, take the attitude that… 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper;approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 高分作文举例: Compu