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1、改进写作实例AdaywithouthomeworkWhatisyourschoollifelikenow?Whatdoesadaywithouthomeworkmeantoyou?Whatcanyoudoonadaywhenthereisnohomework?Myschoollifeisverybusynow,astherearealwaysmanytestpapersandexerciseswaitingforme.However,adaywithouthomeworkisworthexpecting.Ifso,arrivinghomefromschool,Icantu
2、rnonthecomputerimmediatelyandchatwithmyfriends.Icanalsoplaycomputergameswithoutmyparents’complaint.What’smore,Icangetintobedearlyandhaveasoundsleep.IthinkIwillcompletelyrelaxmyselfsoastostudymoreenergeticallythenextday.AspecialgiftIamlookingforwardtoIusedtoreceivegiftslike…ThegiftI’mlooki
3、ngforwardtois…Itisspecialbecause…Ihope…Iusedtoreceivegiftslikebasketballs,cards,cakesandsoon,butthegiftI’mlookingforwardtoisadaywithouthomework.ItisspecialbecauseI’msobusynowadaysthatIseldomhavetimetostaywithmyparents.IhopeonthatdaymyparentsandIwillgototheparkforapicnic.Wecanenjoyourselve
4、sbylyingonthegrassandchattingwitheachother,completelyfreefromthehustleandbustleofthecity.ThenIwillbeabletoreturntoschoolrelaxedandrefreshed.HowIexpectthegifttocomeassoonaspossible!WhatAreGoodFriends?Inyoureyeswhataregoodfriends?Haveyougotanygoodfriends?Whatdotheydowhenyouareintrouble?Give
5、someexamples.Nobodycanliveahappylifewithoutagoodfriend.Peopleneedfriendsjustliketheyneedwaterandfood.Asweallknow,friendsarejustanotherwordfor“help”,becausegoodfriendsalwayshelpeachotherinsomeways.Forexample,whenIhavedifficultiesinmystudies,myfriendswillhelpmetoovercomethem.Besides,wealsow
6、orkandplaytogethertoshareourjoyandsorrow.Inmyopinion,agoodfriendshouldbehonest,friendly,responsible,generousandhumorous.Inbrief,arealfriendmayspendhiswholelifewithyou.…bring(s)mehappinessWhatbringsyouhappiness?Whydoyouthinkitbringsyouhappiness?(Giveatleasttworeasons)Whathaveyoulearntfromi
7、t?Everybodyreadsbooks,butnotallofthemcanfindenjoymentandpleasurefrombooks.Readingbookscannotonlyrelaxme,butbringmehappinessaswell.Veryoftenreadingkeepsthebalancebetweenworkandleisure.WhenIfacedifficultproblems,Iusuallyreadabookforawhile,andtrytoknowakindofspiritandw
