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1、评分标准：（语言，内容）1．内容要切题,统一：写作内容要围绕题目规定的话题展开。提纲式作文要求根据提纲规定的内容和范围展开段落，不能按照自己的思路发挥。且一个段落或一篇文章只有一个中心观点，其他各句，各段均围绕这一中心观点展开描写或论述，否则会留下思路混乱的印象。2．语篇连贯：层次分明，条理清楚。上下文之间，词与词之间，句与句之间要上下连贯，前后呼应，这样文章结构才会严谨，思路清晰，有条理。注意连词，衔接词，指示代词的运用，过度词使文章自然流畅以防生硬。3．语言准确：用词和语法的准确性。无重大语法错误，如：时态不一致，主谓数不
2、一致，用词不当等。4．句式多样性：为避免句型的单调，增加句式的多样性和语言的表现力，在文章中应使用不同结构，不同类型，不同长短的句子，如：简单句，复杂句，倒装句，排比句，感叹句等。如何提高写作水平？选词存在的问题**喜欢用老生常谈的词汇如：喜欢like,enjoy,prefer,love;不能做什么can’tdo,failtodo,unabletodo1.good:positive(effect),favorable(impression),promising(有希望的future)，perfect,pleasant(weat
3、her),excellent,outstanding,superior(to)2.bad:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)，lessimpressiveeg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,the
4、yfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.3.many:(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,)4.some: asliceof,quietafew,several5.think:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)6.inmyopinion:form
5、ypart,frommyownperspective7.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth8.getmanybenefits:reaphugefruits9.moreandmore:Increasing(ly),growing修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.10.He
6、lpful:beneficial,rewarding11.Customer:shopper,consumer,purchaser12.Very:exceedingly,extremely,intensely13.attractone'sattention:captureone'sattentionpourattentioninto替换payattentionto14.cause:giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger15.reasonsforsth:Thereareseveralreasonsbe
7、hindsth16.Want:desire17.Remember:bearinmindthat18.Have:enjoy(highsocialstatus/salary)19.Should:beexpectedto;besupposedto;It’simperativeforsbtodo**喜欢用汉语式的思维来对译英语词汇，忽视其内涵，如：Iambadingrammarandvocabulary(bad---poor)Iwanttohearthemusic(hear---listento)Ifyoumeetsometroubl
8、e,youcanlookforthepoliceman.(turnto)Ifyouhavenomoneytospend,youcanaskfromyourparentsandfriends(asksbforsth)Disadvantagesaremorethanadvanta
