英语说明文及范文点评

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1、英语说明文及范文点评【要求】要求：假设你是一名图书馆的工作人员，请写一篇文章说明文，介绍图书的借阅规则。字数在80100字之间。【范文】SomethingYouMustKnow　ThislibraryisandEnglishLanguageteachingandlearninglibrany.Ifyouwanttoborrowsomebooks,youmustfilloutalibraryapplicationformandputitintheboxonthelibrarian'sdesk.Becauseofthelargenumberof

2、applicationswereceiveeachweek,youmustwaitone　week.Pleasebringyorstudentorworkcardtopickupyourlibrarycard.Libraryapplicationformswhicharenotpickedupwithin2monthswillbediscardedandyouwillhavetoreapply.【评语】本文的借书规则表述得比较清晰，注意到了说明文语言的精练准确、通俗易懂的特点。对于高中生而言，这是一篇优秀的应试作文。Thereisnoind

3、efiniteliberty.【要求】要求：小程原来英语成绩很差，自从他参加了学校的英语角，成绩有了很大的进步，尤其是听力和口语提高更是迅速。请你代小程写一篇短文，介绍一下英语角的情况。【范文】EnglishCorner　EnglishCornerisveryusefultolearntocommunicateinEnglish.Learningaforeignlanguagerequiresfourskills:reading,writing,listeningandspeaking.TheEnglishCornerisawonderfu

4、lplacetopractisebothlisteningandspeaking.EnglishCornerisalsoagoodplacetomeetnewfriends.WhenIwenttoEnglishCornerlastSunday,Icameacrossavarietyofpeople,whoallhadonethingincommon;thatistheywantedtocommunicateinEnglish.Sotheatmospherewasrelaxing.EnglishCornerenlargesourwould.A

5、swelistentoforeignerstalkingabouttheircountriesandcustoms,welearnmanythingsthatwecan'tlearnfrombooks.【评语】本文第一段是总领段，点明了EnglishCorner在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了EnglishCorner如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，无华丽词汇之堆砌，但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。Withoutyou,itwouldhaveneverbeenpossible.Thankyou.【要求】请用

6、英语写一篇关于你校的校园平面图（diagram教师办公室在教学楼三楼。学校四周是树。字数：100【范文】Thisisadiagramofourschoolyard.Itisfourhundredmeterslongandthreehundredmeterswide.Theschoolgatefacesthesouth.Ourteachingbuildingstandsinthemiddleofourschoolyard.Itisabuildingoffivestories.Theteachers'officesareonthethirdfl

7、oor.Thereisagardeninfrontoftheteachingbuilding.Ontheleftofthegardenisourlibrary.Ourlabisontherightofthegarden.Thereisalargeplaygroundbehindtheteachingbuilding.Manytreesareplantedaroundtheschool-yard.【评语】本文按照由外到内、由前往后的顺序进行介绍说明，使文章层次分明，脉胳清晰，说明简短有力。Brevityisthesoulofwit.文以简洁为

8、贵EnglishDictionaries【要求】EnglishDictionariesspelling）；发音（pronunciation）和意项（meanings）。请你写一短