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1、（一）范文： Haveyouevernoticedthe“greatchanges”ofyourhometown?Ifyouhave,youmaysensethesameregretandsorrowastheretiredmandoesinthepictures.Anewly-builtbridgeovertheriverattractstheattentionofhimandspurshisexcitement.However,leaningagainstthebridge,hefindsnowaterflowingintheriver.
2、 Theauthorofthecartoon,throughthesightoftheagedman,isimpartingusthenotionthatneversacrificeecologicalbalanceforeconomicbenefits.Admittedly,economicdevelopmentlabelstheadvancementofsociety!However,neverplacetoomuchemphasisonit,orwemaygotoanextreme!Anycases?Sure!Haven’tyoueverno
3、ticedthatchimneysbroughtbigbuckstoenterprisesbutbigtroublestothegeneralpublic,foggyairforone?Haven’tyoueverfoundthaturbanizationofferspeoplemorehousesbutlesscomfort?Whyarewesozealousof“destroyingoursurroundings”?Aren’twedoingsotoexhibitour“achievements”ofcivilconstruction?
4、 Attheendoftheday,wehavetofindawayout!Onlywiththecombinationoftransformingofeconomicplanning,guidingfromexperts,andsupervisingfromthegeneralpublic,canthesituationturnoptimistic!Currently,departmentconcerned,aidedbyexperts,areworkingforcefullytoboostthegreen-economy.However,ifth
5、erewerealsoeffectivesupervisionfromthegeneralpublic,whichrequiresassistancefromthemassmedia,economicconstructionwouldgogreenandreasonable.（二）范文解读：Haveyouevernoticedthe“greatchanges”ofyourhometown?Ifyouhave,youmaysense（闪光词汇，可以用来替换find）thesameregretandsorrow（这种列举能力是我们大多数考生很欠缺的，这需
6、要我们平时细致的收集、积累。）astheretiredmandoesinthepictures.Anewly-builtbridge（很闪光却很简单的语法结构Anewly—built+名词）overtheriverattracts（也可以换成draws）theattentionofhimandspurs（词典中背了那么久，现在知道它的其中一种表达了吧：spurone’sexcitement）hisexcitement.However,leaningagainstthebridge(两个句子主语相同，省去主语，用现在分词做状语),hefindsnowa
7、terflowingintheriver. Theauthorofthecartoon,throughthesightoftheagedman（主谓断开的插入语表达）,isimparting（闪光词汇，可替换tell等）thenotionthatneversacrificeecologicalbalanceforeconomicbenefits（背：规范表达）.Admittedly（高级连接词，相当于thereisnodoubtthat）,economicdevelopmentlabels(超闪光词汇)theadvancementofsoc
8、iety!However,neverplacetoomuchemphasisonit,orwemaygoto
