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1、1.Thefollowingessaylackssupportingdetailsatcertainkeypoints.Identifythespotswheredetailsareneeded.FormulaforHappiness1Everyonehashisorherownformulaforhappiness.2Aswegothroughlife,wediscovertheactivitiesthatmakeusfeelbest.3I’vealreadydiscoveredthreekeystohappiness.4Idepe
2、ndonkarate,music,andself-hypnosis.5Karatehelpsmefeelgoodphysically.6Beforetakingkaratelessons,Iwastiredmostofthetime,mymusclesfeltlikefoamrubber,andIwastwentypoundsoverweight.7Afterthreemonthsoftheselessons,Isawanimprovementinmyphysicalcondition.8Also,myendurancehasincr
3、eased.9Attheendofmyworkday,Iusedtodragmyselfhometoeatandwatchtelevisionallnight.10Now,Ihaveenoughenergytoplaywithmychildren,shop,orseeamovie.11Karatehasmademefeelhealthy,strong,andhappy.Thespotwheresupportingdetailsareneededoccursaftersentence_____.12Singingwithachorush
4、ashelpedmeachieveemotionalwell-beingbyexpressingmyfeelings.13Insituationswhereotherpeoplewouldrevealtheirfeelings,Iwouldremainquiet.14Sincejoiningthechorus,however,Ihaveanoutletforjoy,anger,orsadness.15WhenIsing,Ipourmyemotionsintothemusicanddon’thavetofeelshy.16Forthis
5、reason,Imostenjoysingingcertainkindsofmusic,sincetheydemandrealdepthoffeeling.Thefirstspotwheresupportingdetailsareneededoccursaftersentence____.Thesecondspotoccursaftersentence_____.17Self-hypnosisgivesmepeaceofmind.18Thisisatotalrelaxationtechnique,whichIlearnedsevera
6、lyearsago.19EssentiallyIbreathedeeplyandconcentrateonrelaxingallmymuscles.20Ithenrepeatakeysuggestiontomyself.21Throughself-hypnosis,Ihavegainedcontroloverseveralbadhabitsthathavelongbeenhauntingme.22Ihavealsolearnedtoreducethestressthatgoesalongwithmysecretarialjob.23N
7、owIcanhandletheboss’sdemandsorunexpectedworkwithoutfeelingtense.Thefirstspotwheresupportingdetailsareneededoccursaftersentence____.Thesecondspotoccursaftersentence_____.24Inshort,myphysical,emotional,andmentalwell-beinghavebeengreatlyincreasedthroughkarate,music,andself
8、-hypnosis.25Theseactivitieshavebecomeimportantelementsinmyformulaforhappiness.2.Thefollowingessaycontainsirrel
