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1、2016高考英语-短文改错集训（七）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage1MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.
2、Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyin
3、gdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!Passage2DearMissLi,I’moneofyourstudentinClassSix,SeniorThree.NowadaysImeetagreatmanydifficultieswhenstu
4、diedEnglish.Tobeginwith,itisverydifficultofmetomemorizealargenumberofnewwords.Inaddition,grammaristoocomplextounderstand,thathasinfluencedmyEnglishwritingseriously.Andmyperformanceonreadingandcorrectingarenotsatisfying.Facedwithsuchadilemma,youhopethatyoucangivemeahand.Wouldyoupr
5、ovidemewithsomeeffectivelyapproaches?Secondly,IbelievethatIwillhavegoodcommandofwhatyouteach,ifyouwillslowdownyourspeedintheclass.ThereisnodoubtwhetherIwillachievegreatprogressinEnglishlearningwithyourassistance.Thankyou.Yours,WangMinPassage3MynieceMaryisaSenior3student,whodevote
6、dherselftoherlessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,shewenttoseveralclass.Intheevening,shecontinuedtostudyathomeuntildeeplyintothenight.Shewastoosleepyandtiredthatshecouldn’tworkeffectively.InSundaymorning,shewasabuttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertakeabreak.Soonthey
7、cameupagoodidea.Theydecidedtogocyclinginthecountryside.Maryenjoyedherself,competingandchattingwithherfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OntheMonday，Marywasenergeticbutactiveinclass.Shespentthewholedayinthecountryside,andMarysaidwhatshehaddonewasworthwhile.Passage4Itisthreeyearsno
8、wsinceIgraduatefromXinhuaHighSchool.Last
