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1、Wehavediscoveredtoourgreatestdisappointmentthat……Itisquitedisappointingtonoticethat…..Wehavediscoveredtoourgreatestsurprisethat……Itisquitedelightfultonoticethat……Wehavediscoveredinrecentyearsthat……Itisquitecommontonoticethat……Itisquitecommontonoticethat……However/therefore,someho
2、ldthat………butothersbelievethat………..AsfarasIamconcernedIwouldnothesitatetostandonthesideoftheformer/laterpointofview.Wehavediscoveredtoourgreatestdisappointment/surprisethat………however/therefore,someholdthat……..asfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldnothesitatetosupportthispointofview,(asfaras…
3、…hesitatetostandagainstthispointofview).Itisquitedisappointing/delightful/commontonoticethat…………consequently,thererisesaheateddebateoverthemeritsanddemeritsofsuchtendency,inthisessayIintendtodiscusstheissueindetail.Ononehand,…….hasalwaysbeenofgreathelptousinmanyways.Inthefirstpl
4、ace,adv1…….支持句………inthesecondplace,adv2……支持句…….Whatismore,adv3…….支持句………Ontheotherhand,therearesomenegativeinfluencesbroughtaboutby….Disadv1……支持句……inaddition,disadv2……支持句……..Whatisworse,disadv3…….支持句………Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat……..canbebothhel
5、pfulandharmful.However,itsadvantagesfaroutweighthepossibledrawbacksthatitproduces.(Onlywhenthedrawbacksof…..areeliminated,cantheproblemberesolvedproperly.) 原因&建议Itisquitedisappointingtonoticethat,inrecentyears,……..Hence,itisimperativethatwepinpointthecausesofthisphenomenonandexp
6、loreeffectivesolutions.Frommyownperspective,thecausesaremultiple.Oneoftheprimarycausesisthat原因1……Itisuniversallytruethat………..,段落总结……..Anotherfactorthatwemusttakeintoconsiderationisthat原因2...………..Thefollowingsuggestionsshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwhenseekingsolutionsfortheprobl
7、ems,first,建议1…....Second,itisnecessaryfor…..to建议2…..However,onlywhenthesuggestionsaboveareputinpracticecantheproblemberesolvedproperly.Why?How?GiveanexampleWhatdoyoumean?Wehavediscoveredtoourgreatestdisappointmentthatanincreasingnumberofteenagersareinvolvedinillegalactivitiesrec
8、ently.Hence,itisimperativethatwepinpointthecaus